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Written by Dave Bottoms   
Tuesday, 01 April 2008
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With the lantern in one hand and his pistol with one bullet in the other, Barney lowered first his left leg, then the right one into that dark abyss. ­As he made his way down he looked up once and thought he could see the Little Dipper in the sky above the mouth of the crater. He thought of Thelma, and how she loved to drive out to Lover's Leap and gaze at the light show of night stars. Andy was right: Thelma was his girl, and he loved her dearly. ­After this, he would stay clear of Juanita at the diner.­ Maybe he would take Thelma up to Lover's Leap on the weekend, she'd like that.

      Below, the dim orange light welcomed, pulsing and then fading; and the quirky strangled off-notes called pleadingly, as he descended.

      Halfway down he­ yelled, "Andy, I'm coming!" but only the cold haunting echo of his own voice answered back.



Copyright 2008 Dave Bottoms
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Posted by Tarhead Mugwump
2008-04-02 00:54:23
okay, got to the end

and i gotta ask... what happened?
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Posted by SA Dave
2008-04-10 15:48:33
....

LOL... that's for your imagination to work out.

I've always been a fan of ambiguous endings.

Thanks for asking.

Dave
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