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A Soldier's Fears


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Written by Christi   
Tuesday, 01 April 2008
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A Soldier's Fears
by Christiane Cardinal 
 
Nightmares keep him awake all night
because he chose to fight
even though though won the war
the scars are still there as a memoir 
while he's at home with his family safely
Other soldier's gave there life bravely
so when he cries from the nightmares
everyone stares
as if he's crazy
But he isn't he just suffers from ghastly 
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Posted by 1800
2008-04-01 17:04:40
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What those soldiers deal with every day I could never do. I am very thankful for them.
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Posted by Tarhead Mugwump
2008-04-01 17:41:06
funny thing

some sights never go away...
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Posted by bookaholic
2008-04-06 15:59:39
me too

I also very thankful for them but I wish war didn't exist
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Posted by Roadkill315
2008-04-06 18:39:28
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Very nice poem, excellent in fact.
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Posted by bookaholic
2008-04-09 14:37:25
thanks for the reviews

thanks for the reviews and if you guys like this you could check out my other story calledDairy of Vampire: Jennifer Hudson Diary which I need some critiscism on and I'll soon be posting a story that I worked on a while ago that I hope you might like.
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