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Awakening of Minds (Part One)

So there I was, looking once more at the device on the...

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Written by Joe   
Tuesday, 01 April 2008
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Demons softly cry
With unsaturated blue eyes
They fall in dawn beyond the passing faces
Rain tarnishes around upon the terraces
Forlorn these demons quickly sigh
Away from them
Yearning dust rises away from silent quiet minds
Demons softy die respires their notes
Hearts if possible long for their home
Away from the meddling clouds
And faltered dreams that pass along the gutters
Ever they watch and anon will pass and fade
The demons passively stand by
Silken dreams that pass with morning grace
Hints and memories of their glory
Still stain the fading lampposts
Their desultory light , a beacon
For their tears of blood
Ran red along the streets that callous feet
Impudent and strong still tread upon
Wavering fools …
They are the children long lost within the battered heart
Demons weep for their salvation
Will yearn in vain and perish along the roads
Carved along with their embittered malice
They too in their time shall call for light once more
In that presence of  pavement angels and  cardboard demons
Will forever weep a harmony in our souls
Demons don’t cry
My heart does



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Comments (7)
Posted by June Eclipsis
2008-04-01 14:18:44
Wow

Beautiful! Just a little too descriptive. "Silent quiet" doesn't really work as the two words are basically saying the same thing, although they are in different degrees.
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Posted by Eternitiesheart
2008-04-01 15:03:41
well....

i actually didnt write this....a friend did
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Posted by Tarhead Mugwump
2008-04-01 16:10:01
your friend

churns out some good lines! how does one not have a title?
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Posted by Eternitiesheart
2008-04-01 16:15:19
well....

he writes random stuff on his away messages and this was a random poem he made up and set as his away one day, i liked it and wanted others to see it, but theres no title so..... yeah
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Posted by resistanceisfreedom
2008-04-01 19:11:58
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thanks for posting it. i really liked it. you should tell him to write more.
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Posted by lobiva nadha
2008-04-01 23:28:07
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that wa really nice,, i loved it
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Posted by Roadkill315
2008-04-03 06:10:16
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Ah, meddling clouds... just how do clouds meddle? :-) I enjoyed your friends work, thanks
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