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Dear Dr. Boring Me...


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Written by Anna DeVine   
Monday, 31 March 2008
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Dear Dr. Boring Me...


Save your "wise" philosophy
For someone more inclined
To listen to such vanity
And bullshit of the mind

Who died and made you boring?
I envy them indeed
Sometimes a mental suicide
Is really all you need

For life is over-rated
While death gets a bad name
And love's just some ridiculous
Misleading kind of game

And irony is killing me
Through life sustaining air
But still I can't stop breathing it
For it is everywhere

Self-hate then just comes natural
So talk? I'd rather not
For rhyme can live inside of me
But reasoning cannot 






Copyright 2008 Anna DeVine
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Comments (5)
Posted by R.E.Potter
2008-04-01 06:26:41
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Your poems are always so heartfelt with a touch of humor added. Loved this one....naturally.
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Posted by Terry Collett
2008-04-01 08:39:12
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Word perfect poem; darn good theme too.
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Posted by thirteen
2008-04-01 11:14:10
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Your poems feel as if bein hit by a hammer(but in a nice way lol).Just amazing.
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Posted by gsaracen
2008-04-02 08:59:51
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really liked this one. :)
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Posted by Zombie Punk
2008-07-09 00:16:08
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whoa!

That one was freakin fantastic! It had some a awesome flow, kind of like a spilt glass of water. It flows out so quickly and clear. This is going in favorites, too. Man, this was a really really good one.
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