Posted by R.E.Potter 2008-03-31 17:56:28 ,,,
thought this was cute + Report this comment |  |
Posted by Dirkin 2008-03-31 18:32:13 ....
short but good, a snap shot of life for the infirm + Report this comment |  |
Posted by Sad Sara 2008-03-31 22:03:43 Aye
Unfortunately I can relate with Mr. Hampton's frustration, it's truly maddening to be looked at like that.
Yer've captured a lot here , yer effectual handling of yer words indeed has produced a laconic verse very rich in content.
Impressive to say the least.
Take care,
'Anna + Report this comment |  |
Posted by SA Dave 2008-04-01 04:13:28 ....
Thanks so much for your kind words.
Dave + Report this comment |  |
Posted by Tarhead Mugwump 2008-04-01 05:17:50 very nice
i am already falling prey to the "i usta do that's". + Report this comment |  |
Posted by thirteen 2008-04-01 06:26:24 ....
I see this everyday at work,goodwork. + Report this comment |  |
Posted by lorislittlesecret 2008-04-03 07:47:42 ....
Sad what age does to us... + Report this comment |  |
Posted by Roadkill315 2008-04-03 08:23:10 ....
I found this poem sad, good, but sad, which is good, not that being sad is good, but writing sad is good, so yes, it was good. + Report this comment |  |