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I sit and wait for you, my love

Here alone, watching the door

To you to return from her,

As you have a hundred times before

But tonight will be different, dear

There's a slight smile upon my face

True to me you'll forever be,

With the plan I have in place.

See, I heard that call the other night,

I heard your whispered words of love.

So I followed you and watched you kiss

Under the sparkling moon above

My heart broke, as I watched you, darlin',

I couldn't believe my own eyes.

After all I had done for you...

What I thought was love, was nothing but lies

So as I sit and wait for you,

I twist around my finger an errant curl,

This shotgun is heavy on my lap...see,

You don't cheat on a Southern girl!

Keyword: Don't Cheat on a Southern Girl!

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Posted by thirteen 2008-03-31 14:25:49 .... Wow, what do they say about a woman scorned.Really good , loved it. + Report this comment
Posted by lorislittlesecret 2008-03-31 14:37:54 .... Amen sister....from another southern girl.... + Report this comment
Posted by R.E.Potter 2008-03-31 15:13:09 ,,, reminds me of the song from Garth...well done. + Report this comment
Posted by Captain Morgen 2008-03-31 15:19:48 .... funny little tale and a good rhythm. I like it a lot + Report this comment
Posted by Sharon Galligar Chance 2008-04-01 00:43:15 .... Thank you for your kind comments! I appreciate your reading! + Report this comment
Posted by WordWhore 2008-04-01 19:51:40 .... nice and nasty at the same time. sweet but deadly. vivid imagery! I'd shoot the bastard, too! + Report this comment
Posted by 1800 2008-04-01 20:16:02 .... You see here folks? Marriage has a 100% mortality rate for men. You get married and anywhere from a day to fifty years later, you're dead. But sometimes a man's gotta do what a man's gotta do. + Report this comment
Posted by Tarhead Mugwump 2008-04-01 21:41:33 but... goodness! + Report this comment
Posted by gsaracen 2008-04-02 11:20:03 AWESOME don't go cheatin' on a southern girl...she'll kick yer ass and and shoot yer mask... don't ever go cheatin' on a southern girlllllllll-luh! + Report this comment
Posted by Sharon Galligar Chance 2008-04-02 21:01:22 Thank you all for your great comments! I so much appreciate them! + Report this comment

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