Posted by June Eclipsis
2008-03-31 14:02:29
I wonder why
People say they don't understand this kind of poetry. This was beautiful and I actually understood it!
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Posted by Zombie Punk
2008-08-08 13:45:50
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Gotta admit, I never used to understand Poetry. Used to steel clear of it, but ever since I started understanding it about a month ago I've been addicted to it. And your Poems are a great fix.
This was another good one, short and to the point.
Great Work!
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Posted by r.e.potter
2008-08-08 13:56:34
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I will say it...dont understand this kind of poetry. But Ill rate it a 5 cause its me not you...perhaps
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Posted by Pilgrim
2008-09-07 13:34:42
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Interesting.
I liked your use of punctuation, as if, this is the first time I've seen you use it. Maybe that's what's different about this poem. Who knows. I liked it. Good imagery, good flow. Understandable.
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