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17 pointsThis story may contain adult content. |
| Written by shillet | |
| Friday, 28 March 2008 | |
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Share it:      17 points
Well who really cares about me. I bet nobody does. I live in a place. This place is like a living hell. I can’t see what’s outside of this place. There is only darkness….. “Who are you?….do I know you?….GET OUT!!! GET OUT!!!!!! Please…..please just leave…..” I hear sobbing…To my surprise it is myself who is sobbing… There are some people who live in me. I don’t know them but they tell me what to do. “Kill them!!!” they would always say. “Get out of this place and get your revenge!!!” They are always yelling at me… There are people who are in this place with me but outside. They hurt me a lot. I’m locked up in here by a threat. “If you ever get out then we will kill your friends and families then finally you!!!” it’s all good though. Because I don’t have a family or friends. I have a bathroom in this room. I have a bed. It sometimes hurt my back and I can’t fall asleep but I can sleep on a bed. I have water that I drink from the sink from the bathroom. I take showers and baths in freezing cold water but it’s really fun now because I’m used to it now. I have to find my own food sometimes when they don’t give me food. There are flies in this room along with cockroaches and rats. They are what I eat. But when the people outside give me food, I eat their “leftovers”. That’s what they call them. They are good but later on I will just puke them out and save them for next time… 3 O’ clock. I can’t fall asleep because this bed is hurting me. “ **** you!! Why don’t you just go back to that ******* *****!!! I thought you said that you love her so much that you can’t let her go!!!” I hear the lady shouting. Then I hear a man’s voice. “Look I’m sorry okay. I didn’t mean to leave you. I-I-I don’t know what I was thinking but I made a mistake.” “How many times do you **** that ***** in a day???!!!” “What?” “Answer me damn it!” “………3….,” I heard him say quietly. “URG!!!” I hear a slap sound… “LEAVE!!!” After a long pause the guy said, “Ok. I’m sorry. I came to apologize and you just yell at me like that so I know I’m not changing anything so I’ll just leave now.” I hear foot steps. Then the sound of a knob being turned then a door being open then closed. Silence. There are tears in my eyes. It’s so dark at night it’s almost scary. “AAAAHHHHHH!! AAAHHHHH!!! AAHHH!!” I got from screaming from the tops of my lungs to crying softly. She went out. She slammed the door and locked it. She now left me with new scars… “I told you to kill them but you wouldn’t so this is what happens to you,” said the voice. “I can’t.” “Yes you can”, said another one broadly. I thought to myself… “Just think about the times when they always beat you,” one of them said. “They always put their anger out on you. Who are you to them? You are just somebody to put their anger on. If you don’t destroy them, they will destroy you.” “Kill them and you will finally be free,” one said softly yet disturbingly. “You guys are all right. I should do something.” Three sun downs after. She comes in with him, a big old guy. “Ahaha. This is the little ***** I was talking ‘bout,” she said, “that’ll be 5oo bucks. He hands her the money. “Knock three times when you’re down,” she said to him before going outside and closing the door. “ *****! You’re dirty so go wash up first then you can give me pleasure!!! I turned on the faucet in the tub and took off my rags. “Hhmmm…nice body you got there ****. Hahaha.” I went in there and washed my dirty body. Five minutes later I got out. He zipped down his zippers and took his penis out. He lay down but got up again and took off his pants. “I see a pocket knife in his pocket…” one said to me. “I know,” I said back. The man looks at me and said, “Alright you know. Just shut up and moan for me while you ride my dick.” He lay down and he told me to get on top of him. I did as I was told. He put his penis into my vagina and I had to keep it in while going up and down. I moaned. Then finally he is satisfied after 2 hours. He laid there and I got off. I sat on the ground and silently took the knife from his pocket. I put in between my butt cheeks when he told me to get on him again. I did so and put the knife under the pillow when he was biting my nipples. I went up and down again. He was closing his eyes. I took out the knife and opened it. He opened his eyes right when he felt me slit his throat and the blood got on me. I smiled as I finish licking his blood off the knife. I laughed as he slowly died and I went up and down very fast and hard. Then he dies and I got off. I went to the door. I knocked three times loudly. “So you’re finally done with her,” I hear her say. She opens the door and she saw me covered in blood. “What did you do??!!” She covers her mouth in disgust. I smiled and before she knew it the knife is already through her neck. She fell down. I took out the knife and licked her blood on the knife in front off her. “Score two points!! Yea!!” The voice keeps saying this. “Yea. Two points!!” I said also. I went to each room. I slaughtered anyone in there. I got from 4 points to 8 to 12. I went to the kitchen after the last point: 16. I took a red round thing from the fridge. Then I ate it. It was really good and sweet. Then I ate up 1/3 of the food in there. I took some liquid in a glass bottle and drank it. It was nasty and bitter. I tried another one. It was sweet and good. I drank it all…. I went to one of the ladies room and put on some of her clothes. Then I went to a room that had no one in there. One that looks like my bathroom. I went in and turned. I see a girl staring at me. She looks like somebody who is around the age of 15 years old. She is pretty and there is blood on her face and body. She is holding a knife. “Kill her!! How can you forget her!!!” the voices told me. I took the knife to stab her as she did the same to me but our knives just slammed into each other at the point. I kept trying to kill her as she tries to kill me. “Cut yourself and she will feel pain,” they said. I asked,” what??” “Just do it” “It will work.” “Yea. Try it!!” I cut my finger off. I scream in pain and she did too. I laugh and she laughs. She copies every move I do. A plan popped into my mind. I cut off my arm slowly and painfully. I want her to feel the pain for a long time. I keep going deeper and deeper but then I hit something hard. Then I decided to cut strip of my skin off. After that I just stood there waiting for her to die. She was crying so I started to enjoy her pain but then she enjoys mine too. I got tired of her bullshit then I stabbed I chest and she did the same thing. I watched and wait to see which one of us dies first. Then I fell and from the corner of my eye I see her falling too. I closed my eyes and whispered, “Yes. 17 points,” …………
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