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1. The Daily Fish: A Conceptual Requiem


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Written by Anna DeVine   
Friday, 28 March 2008
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A Conceptual Requiem


Going over any board
In hopes to get away
From the torpid dust I grind
And speak of everyday

Notions far from interesting
Are spilling out of me
And aloofness always finds
My taciturnity

Generating warmth in speech
Requires written thought
Conversations with myself
Indeed I've had a lot

Silence sounds more cordial
But since I am a Fish
Sad reserves are always cold
So call me what you wish 






Copyright 2008 Anna DeVine
Keyword: Pisces
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Posted by Rover
2008-03-29 08:18:39
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This sounds very misterious...I don't know if it's me not getting what the poem is about, or if it was meant to be this way. Anyway I like it, it feels like there is something important that is just out of reech....
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Posted by Terry Collett
2008-03-29 13:38:28
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a talented poet writes again a classic poem.
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Posted by Zombie Punk
2008-07-09 00:12:29
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I take it you dont like those little golden fish crackers. They're some cruel bastards, huh?

I admit I'm a little confuzed over this one. Hmm....maybe I get it later on, eh?

It rhymed smoothly brw,
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