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Written by Dave Bottoms   
Tuesday, 25 March 2008

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I’m no poet, he said,
only a scribbler. Not
an artist, nor a writer.
Nothing you want me to be.

More than a little disturbed,
she said (while turning away)
I thought you were...
                   someone else.

And he said, So did I.



Copyright 2008 Dave Bottoms
Keyword: The Party
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Posted by R.E.Potter
2008-03-25 10:34:48
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Kinda creepy... not a party I would like to go to. Is that the Hulk? neat poem by the way.
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Posted by Tarhead Mugwump
2008-03-25 13:16:32
pretty slick

one of those happens all the time things - well displayed.
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Posted by SA Dave
2008-03-25 16:14:28
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Thank you. I wrote it a while back. The photo is of Frankenstein's monster, actually. It sort of fits, since the poem's about not fitting in.

D.
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Posted by nick711
2008-03-25 19:12:22
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that was a great poem.
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