Marks Trilogy Part 1 - A Secret Life

The smell was almost overpowering and it hit them...

My Own Personal Hell

I wake up everyday, And they die a...


Mirror


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Written by August Blackwood   
Monday, 24 March 2008
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Stop, stop pushing me Into the light.

I do not belong here and

I hate its sight.

I felt comfort there, there

In the dark.

I can't breathe, I'm drowning,

I can see the shark,

Slowly approaching me with

It's sharp ivory,White as snow, yet devilish,

Quite an irony.my lungs fill with the bright light.

This is not me, I scream with

All my might.

You think I'll be happy, surrounded

In heavenly glory.

It's too bright, it's too strong,

I'm sorry,

Bring me back!!

I loved my old self more.

I loved my tears, my weaknesses, my pain.

I don't want to fight anymore.

I don't need to gain.

My sorrow, my grey,

They're all that I have left.

Don't take them away.



Copyright 2008 August Blackwood
Keyword: Mirror
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Comments (4)
Posted by alfred
2008-03-24 11:23:30
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didn't understand.
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Posted by nick711
2008-03-24 15:56:29
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didnt either/ but the words sounded beautiful.
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Posted by resistanceisfreedom
2008-03-24 19:43:25
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i really liked this. what i took from it was a person who was being forced to change their old dark ways but they didn't want to change they wanted to stay in the dark. maybe i'm off but that's what i took from it. basically a person who couldn't accept change.
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Posted by Tarhead Mugwump
2008-03-25 01:21:56
while reading this

an image of gollum of lord of the rings fame came to mind...

being led by a nun into a church to be redeemed.

that was nicely written!
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