Love Ends

The sun rose serenely over the pond, changing the...

Last Christmas

Christmas was going to come early this year and...


.parting.


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Written by Adam.A   
Sunday, 23 March 2008
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How stupid do i feel right now? I saw the door was open, but i guess i should have knocked before i walked in. I can't beleive it. i mean, it was just a kiss on the cheak right? no harm done in that, right? we had held each other while walking to the station, talking comfortably amungst the moment that hung between us and our converstation continued while we were on the train..then it came to my stop and i went for it. - i mean, its not like i planted one on her lips and stuck my tongue down her throat - we awkwardly tried to figure out a way to part...and ended up some how hugging, and thats when i moved in to the side of her face a gave her a kiss on the cheak..hahah, and right then and there she pushed me out of what moment i thought i had seized. 'Shit' i thought to myself. not for the fact that my jesture wasn't complete but, it was the fact on how dumb i looked and probably messed up something between us. To make things worse actually, i jokingly pushed her off me and said "get the hell off me" hahahahhahaa..how she took that i won't know because i just started to walk away and didn't look back...stuck with my tail between my legs regretting and wishing i could redo what just happend. " ****," i said out loud to myself, "i shouldn't have done that" shaking my head and walking to my bus...still not looking back at her as i walked away. Now it being only an hour since the mishap happend, i can't get it out of my head. what is going to happen now? i work with this girl..****, i work with this girl...what an awkward next shift thats going to be.

 

 

 



Copyright 2008 Adam.A
Keyword: .parting.
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Comments (3)
Posted by R.E.Potter
2008-03-23 18:05:01
,,,

We have all been there, maybe not in the same regard, but all have been rejected in some form or fashion. Cute story, and it was about the right length of what it was about.
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Posted by thirteen
2008-03-24 02:02:44
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true, reminds me of my younger years.Interesting, I would have used a larger font but thats not big deal.
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Posted by Tarhead Mugwump
2008-03-24 02:15:51
sorry, couln't help myself...

i had just posted the lyrics to this song, and then decided to do some reading and found a story for it...

thanks!

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Not Far Gone

Draw me a picture,

Show me a sign,

Let me know what you have in mind,

So I’ll know – I’m not far gone.

When we go for a walk,

I want to take your hand,

I wish you’d help me understand,

So I’ll know – I’m not far gone.

The thought I need you to find

Is that I can’t read your mind.

So I don’t know whether to stop or go.

The words I want to say are on my lips everyday

But if I let them fly would you go away?

Draw me a picture,

Show me a sign,

Let me know what you have in mind,

So I’ll know – I’m not far gone.

Just give me something,

So I can grab hold.

Let me know if I should be bold

So I’ll know – I’m not far gone.

The thought I need you to find

Is that I can’t gauge your mind.

So I don’t know whether to stop or go.

The words I want to say are on my lips everyday

But if I let them fly would you go away?
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