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| Written by Roxas Loneheart | |
| Saturday, 22 March 2008 | |
Anew
I'm lost in a place I don't have any memory of. It's like I've never been here but it seems as I know this place. The sound's in this place reminds me of a special place I used to go as a young child. But that was only my imagination, this is for real. It is like I've ventured to that special place. I know I'm no longer home. But this feels rather good, this place feel more like home than my actual home. I hear the sound of the waves and the breeze hitting my face. I know my special place actually came true, but how? Whatever I think of is in this place and all I do has happened before. It's like I'm a child again lost in my own dreams. But this is for real no games and no jokes. Soon I began to realize that I am loosing my thoughts and memories or everything. I'm becoming one with this place. I've had a bad childhood so those thought are not worth remembering. And my adolescence wasn't good for me. I became the island I was on. I knew every corner and every bit of sand on it. I never grew hungry and tired I just explored what I already knew. This was my home now and I loved it. Here I never had to worry about my past troubles. I didn't think I just acted. Soon I started to question why I am here never got an answer. But years passed and I heard a voice, it said "you are not forgotten and you are not lost, you are simply anew." I started to talk to this voice and became friends with it. One day I asked him "how do you become anew?" He replied "son you have passed." I tried to think of what he said but I couldn't get it. It was like if he was talking in riddles. After that day I never questioned it again, years passed and I began to remember about what it told me. And I realized that all of this is made by me so I thought and actually got it. I was dead that's what he meant my "passed." So I asked him "how did I pass?" He said "you did your duty." "You helped a needed person, you gave your life." I tried to remember but got nothing then I looked up and said "you do exist?" I didn't get an answer but I knew deep down inside he was listening. At first I felt out of place now I know I am not lost I'm found in my own story...................
Comments (2) |
 03-23-2008 07:07, Im glad your not lost,,,cause I am. » Reply to this comment...  03-23-2008 07:49, I won't be as hard as Mr. Alfred. I understood the story... I think. I took it as a man who died from serving his country in the armed forces. I think he was now spending eternity in his favorite place while alive... good story, but I'm sure I'm way off. » Reply to this comment... |
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