isn't it beautiful

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Isn't it beautiful

            It's been ten years since I've seen your lovely smile and your beautiful face.  I've written to you all of these years but I never get any reply.  This will be my last letter.  The reason I'm saying this is because I am leaving and never coming back.  Nobody will hear from me anymore.  I'm going to that place I once told you about, that marvelous city that never sleeps.  The city lights are always on and the people are out every hour on the clock.  I would've liked to have taken you there.  I know you would've loved it.  We would hang out all day go see the city.  Eat out as much as we could and never rest.  Then at the end of the day we would go to the sea.  We would watch the sun go down and count the stars as one by one they appear.  We'd lie on the beach all night and we'd walk on the shore.  We'd leave our footprints on the side of the ocean then see them disappear.  I'd sit next to you and tell you the story of our lives.  Make up new adventures for days to come and see the sun rise.  But we wouldn't move we'd stay and see the people as they come one after the other.  Then we would set off on our adventures.  We wouldn't have any problems we'd just be making our lives and living them.  Then the years would pass and days will go on.  We'd grow old together and we'd have children and watch them grow together.  Then one day when we are old I'd take you back around the city.  Eat all day long and then at the end of the day back to the place where we laid all night.  We'd count the stars again walk on the shore and I'd tell you the story of what we lived, and how we stayed together throughout the time.  But this time we'd go to sleep in an eternal sleep and we'd disappear from or place.  It's like we would become glymps.  Soon after we'd look down from the stars and see our children doing the same. Then we would be happy knowing we left a legacy of love behind.  Then we would say "isn't it beautiful." And that's how I would've pictured our lives in that city the city called "eternity."  But I guess ill be going alone so this is my letter saying goodbye.  And if you ever want to see me again here are the directions to it ill be waiting every night on the beach counting the stars. 

GOODBYE

Love Shawin

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Posted by sgulab 03-24-2008 11:25,   ... omg that was a beautiful piece. I loved it :D great job   » Report this comment to administrator » Reply to this comment...   Posted by R.E.Potter 03-24-2008 11:44,   ,,, Is this a suicide? What a sad letter. I've never been able to bring someone to this point of despair...sucks..wait,,that didn't come out right.   » Report this comment to administrator » Reply to this comment...

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