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Prickled tickled forks grind through sausaged onion leftovers go driving swirving through your ears canals like the wrath of earth from of what he doesn’t know is that I control the largest industrial worksapce isle that goes through me and me only with burin bricks of flash that run sparkling down the wicks of saddled men on foot baring launched parachutes exploding outwards like puffing flames of red rust that expand and condense like heaving stomachs of vile and vomit into streams that run luke warm between fingers of frozen dead clenched hands that try to slash with filed down claws through a locked bolt screen door as the blooded red aluminum frame watches and glints with contemptuous eyes

screaming    insanity and horrible laughter at this will which he cannot have that of which is just beyond the other side of this screaming red screen door

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Posted by celtic1888 2008-03-20 14:10:27 wow Sorry might just be me but i didnt understand that at all + Report this comment
Posted by Tarhead Mugwump 2008-03-20 14:26:14 i read it i read it, i read it, i read it, read it, ead it, ad it, d it, it... i really liked reading it. i reminded me of the early beatle movies - and sometimes the way that my brain defrags... did i get the message you were trying to convey? maybe, it all depends on what message you were trying to convey... i'll wait patiently to see where your next submission takes us - then i'll come back with new knowledge and read it again. smile! + Report this comment
Posted by R.E.Potter 2008-03-20 14:36:48 ,,, This might sound wierd, but I wrote something very simular once. Ofcourse, I was drunk out of my mind. + Report this comment
Posted by lorislittlesecret 2008-03-20 14:39:21 .... I may be dumb...but this is over my head....seriously. Maybe I am not drunk enough or need more drugs.... + Report this comment
Posted by Xena 2008-03-20 19:18:47 I can say that the last part i took from a memory of a time when my friend was head first up up against a red screen door trying to get outside because he had to puke... i rushed over to help but we couldn't get it unlocked.. and before I knew it i could feel the warm drip of his puke on my hand... and yea then it just kinda plopped out like what youve just read above. + Report this comment
Posted by Dirkin 2008-03-21 01:40:04 .... strange and very surreal, I would not be able to understand it without your explanation, but sometimes that is fun too + Report this comment
Posted by billyboy 2008-03-24 00:23:07 .... o.k. That's it. I'm outa here!! + Report this comment
Posted by deadfamilytree 2008-04-07 16:25:50 .... yea it makes sence now that u explained it. i enjoyed it + Report this comment
Posted by jt conner 2008-04-28 10:57:42 .... Perhaps I am just on a mean streak, but I think that you are just not taking anything seriously. + Report this comment
Posted by Zombie Punk 2008-05-02 20:42:50 .... that didnt make any sense to me. + Report this comment
Posted by Egoist 2008-06-07 17:42:50 .... I did this once. I think. I sat in front of a desk with a piece of paper and a pencil and just started to write words and I never let my mind go blank. Though the words you wrote were a lot bigger than mine. + Report this comment

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