gone was the girl

gone was the girl once innocent of love, heartaches...

The Letter

He couldn't believe it. He looked down at the letter...

No Way Back


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Written by Sorrow Is My Mask   
Wednesday, 19 March 2008
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No Way Back

 

Lost in a world with no control

Lost in this mind and its gaping holes

 

How do I find my way back

What's the distance between you and what I lack

 

Every time I get off the floor

They keep coming back for more

 

My disguises are leading to doubt

Masks of sorrow turn inside out

 

I've been talking to the clouds all day

But they don't listen to a word I say

 

They are as selfish as I

They just float up there in the sky

 

Scars and bite marks lay imperfect on the skin

I let everyone down when I let you in

 

Where are all my friends

Deep down could they have all been pretend

 

I truly can't say anymore

The absence of truth, left me broken on the floor

 

Even now you still won't leave my head

It's better if everything was just dead

 

My eyes can't seem to repair their vision

I keep seeing blurred lines and empty decisions

 

Once the body shuts itself down

There is no turning anything around

 

It's the same scenery again and again

In time everything leads to a dead end



Copyright 2008 Sorrow Is My Mask
Keyword: No Way Back
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Comments (5)
Posted by lorislittlesecret
2008-03-19 12:42:00
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Very dark and depressing, but well written
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Posted by Dirkin
2008-03-19 21:26:29
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Depression is terrible. Well captured
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Posted by Sad Sara
2008-03-20 04:10:21
Sorrowful One

Are yer still doomin' and gloomin'?

What the hell?

Get up and go lay on the couch, it's way more comfortable than the floor, next to mention more sanitary.

This one was more sad and despondant than yer usual 'goin' to hell in handbasket' verses.

I hope yer all right.

Take care,

'Anna
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Posted by R.E.Potter
2008-03-20 13:09:23
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Like how you through your name as you call it into this depressing poem. I know u can smile...lets see it in your next poem.
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Posted by Roadkill315
2008-04-12 17:17:14
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Deep, depressing, were you going for that?

:-)

You did good, thanks!
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