Posted by Tarhead Mugwump
2008-03-19 11:14:55
that one
was a little heavy for my taste, but well written...
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Posted by lorislittlesecret
2008-03-19 12:43:04
....
Again a poem with no hope
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Posted by Sad Sara
2008-03-20 05:55:49
Ooh, angry sorrow
What the hell?
Yer Poem was scary. hehe
Passion, yeah
Juss not fer funshine lemonade and soda fountain malts.
Unless of course there is arsenic in the lemonade and a deathburger with cheese leading laced with razor blades to go with that malt. 'eh?
Oh angry one, before I ferget, Satan left me a message on me voice mail.
Err...
He's asked me to tell yer to tone it down a bit, it seems yer fookin' scarin' him and givin' him the thumbsucker's dreams again.
Oh, an' if yer see him, tell him I'm not his fookin' secretary, actually, I'm not his anything, not sure how he got me number, it's not even listed.
Anyway
Oh yeah, and don't shoot/poision/or burn the messanger.
Aye, all kidding aside, yer Poem's fine, juss pissed off and hostile.
I have a few 'em meself.
*Gasps*
That's right kiddies, gather 'round, gather 'round...
'Anna
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Posted by R.E.Potter
2008-03-20 12:53:06
,,,
Sounds like you bombed a building just to get rid of your wife...but im scratching my head regardless.
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