He had been a very lonely man.  At 47, he figured that he would live the rest of his life alone.  He was slightly round, balding, aging, and just had never been able to impress the girls.  But then he saw her across the store.  She was smiling back at him as their eyes met.  It was love at first sight.  She was the perfect girlfriend.  She was so beautiful and so sexy.  She never talked back to him and went along with whatever he wanted.

            He looked at her sitting across the table from him.  She was smiling back at him.  He cooked many meals for her, and she always liked what he made.  She never complained about his cooking, or the way he cooked, or anything.  She just always smiled at him when he served her, just like she was doing now.

            Dinner passed uneventfully and he decided to be romantic and give her a bath.  He lit all the candles in the bathroom, ran the water and made sure that it wasn't too hot.  He didn't want to burn her delicate skin.  Sensually he undressed her and helped her into the tub.  He used the sponge and washed over her soft body.  He looked at her face.  She was still smiling at him.

            Then he decided that he wanted to wash her hair.  She was perfect and he wanted to show her that he cared.  He lathered her up and then rinsed it out, making sure that he didn't get any water into her eyes.  He knew that she wouldn't complain.  She never did.  She always did whatever he asked without backtalk.

            He helped her out of the tub and put the towel around her.  He rubbed her soft skin dry and then got the excess moisture out of her hair.  Then he took the brush and lovingly brushed her hair out, kissing her softly on the back of the neck.  Desire ran through his body as he caressed her.  His hands roamed all over his body as he decided how he wanted to make love to her this evening.

            He guided her into the bedroom and laid her on the bed.  He kissed her soft body all over, lingering on her big beautiful breasts.  His hands roamed over her taking in the soft curves of her hips.  Finally he entered her and rode her until he climaxed in her.  He looked at her and the smile that was on her face.  He was glad that he had found her and that she could bring him such great pleasure.

            He got off the bed and got a washrag to clean her up.  She was such the perfect girlfriend, never complaining of the mess he made.  He gently wiped her off.  She was beautiful, his perfect doll.  Never complaining, always smiling, going along with whatever he wanted.  He picked her up and carried her to the closet.  There he put her back in the box to await another day.

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Posted by Munky 2008-03-19 08:29:02 .... Wow. I am not quite sure what to say. I realized half-way that she wasn't real and yet I was still caught off guard at the end. Well-written. Interesting, in a dark way :))) + Report this comment
Posted by Vango 2008-03-19 09:48:32 .... Sounds like my girlfriend. + Report this comment
Posted by Tarhead Mugwump 2008-03-19 10:49:05 not sure that a guys mind could apply that much caring in that instance - but your writing was excellent! + Report this comment
Posted by thirteen 2008-03-19 12:12:19 .... Liked it Michelle, gotta get one of those thingies. + Report this comment
Posted by thirteen 2008-03-19 12:15:01 .... Why am I thirteen. Thirteen is 1,787 too short for my name. Still, I almost spit out the coke I was drinking when I read the last line. Caught me off guard! As for me, I'll probably end up like that guy unfortunately. There was only one girl I ever knew who I loved romantically. She was perfection. She was beautiful, but not necessarily sexy. I wanted to do whatever she wanted me to do for her. But if she asked me to engage in some sinnin', I would feel that I would be desecrating her by performing the act. Fortunately, I never had to do anything for her, but she went to a different school. I have not seen her in two years. But that is the perfect girlfriend. Doesn't talk back, doesn't complain, doesn't need sustenance. + Report this comment
Posted by Pez 2008-03-19 12:18:15 .... Yeah, saw the human-sized doll coming (it's been done before, and that first time just stays with you, so I really couldn't think of yours as something special). Careful with sentences like, "She never talked back to him and went along with whatever he wanted." You're saying that she never went along with what he wanted, when I know you meant the opposite. Something more like, "She never talked back to him, [but or instead] went along with whatever he wanted." It's still a pretty ugly sentence, I say re-word the whole thing... Can agree with the message, a man can essentially look for what is really doll-like in a woman. A woman that will stay by his side, be submissive and kind, beautiful and a humble subject to his every sexual need... + Report this comment
Posted by R.E.Potter 2008-03-19 14:38:52 ,,, Agree with Tar man,,, a guy wouldn't go through all that prep work. he'd just blow her up and have at it....umm,,so I've heard + Report this comment
Posted by Rowena 2008-03-19 16:10:03 .... lol - thank god i wasn't drinking or eating ....... on the last sentence i would have choked to death . well done .... + Report this comment
Posted by lorislittlesecret 2008-03-20 08:22:07 .... I wonder how many people spewed out stuff on their computer as they read this story.... + Report this comment
Posted by gsaracen 2008-03-21 06:46:27 lol funny...but sad. I knew half-way through she'd be a doll. Still, even though I may be supposed to think of the guy as a perv or loser, felt sad for him. When you compensate yourself like that, inside, you still don't lose the bitterness and deprivation that got you to whatever fake compensation you are taking. But that is life. The opposite sex is an insoluble problem. Better to get a blow-up doll than go crazy and become sort of misogynist (or ultra-feminist, lol). But the guy's still hilarious. lol. And the author is a bit crazy! :P (jk) + Report this comment
Posted by alfred 2008-03-23 09:04:59 oh please Im suppose to believe that a guy(loser that he may be) Is gonna go through all that headache for a little piece of plactic. The story seems to have been thought of and punched in on your keypad in a matter of moments. Predictable and unbelieveable. + Report this comment
Posted by Sharon Galligar Chance 2008-03-23 17:27:32 cute! Very cute...wonder if they make a male model??? (just kidding!) + Report this comment
Posted by allmine 2008-03-24 12:00:06 .... As predictable as it may have been, 300+ people have read it so far. Must have done something right. And yes, they actually do make a male version.... :) + Report this comment
Posted by R.E.Potter 2008-03-25 18:55:43 ,,, By the way...never told u in my comment that I thought this was a cute story. + Report this comment
Posted by thirteen 2008-03-27 13:07:32 .... There is a film that is very simular to this idea, so its not that unbelievable, is it. + Report this comment
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