if it helps any, i totally understand the message. one of the things that i preach to my kids nonstop is that nothing matters in life... nothing except how you feel about yourself. life rule #1, and there is only one rule is live it and love it - cause if you're not happy, you're wasting precious time.

if you're not happy - change direction. identify the variables, adjust, take two steps to the left or right and don't look back. reinvent yourself and move forward.
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as soon as you can't see me, the warranty expires!

take care!
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The 3rd for me seems to be saying that we sometimes are scared to make a change in fear of being ridiculed.

But in my opinion, every choice you make makes some difference. Like Eve and the apple. I wonder if she never took a bite would we all be running round naked...yikes!!!........fantastic poem from your insight....keep the presses rolling
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I aggree with this line,Do many people avoid finding out bad news? When my gran was dying, i turned off my phone, i did not want to know just wanted to pretend that life was rosy.Maybe we dont like to admit it but I think most of us feel like this sometimes.Good Man Dirk.
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I agree with thirteen, I think most of us do feel like this at times.
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'Do worker bees rage against their honeycomb walls?'

Aye, the frustration of droning on fer sustenance yet finding that only deprivation is being sated...

Yeah, I can see where honey-coating that sting especially when such provisions redundantly come up lacking would instigate a little rage within the hive.

Cool verse Dirkin.

Very cool in fact.

I like yer Poetic side indeed.

'Anna
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