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The Good Morning


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Written by August Blackwood   
Monday, 17 March 2008
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Little John was sitting on his mother’s lap as she got herself ready for the evening party she was to attend with her husband. She was humming a very sweet tune.

John was looking at his mother through the mirror, wondering what on earth she was putting onto her face.

He felt the powder land like snowflakes onto his head. It felt so uncomfortable and it looked so weird that he attempted to remove it.

“Oh, dear,” the mother cried out as she looked down at her son. Her son’s hair was covered with the powder, making him look like he had fine, thin tentacles sticking out of his head.

“Good grief,” she said again.

But, she continued to apply her makeup. John was only three and he was pinned between his mother’s thigh and the edge of the desk. She didn’t budge, nor did she attempt to remove him from her seat.

John was in agony. He was crying and wailing but his mother started to whistle a circus song as if she were attempting to drown her son’s screams.

There was too much powder. What was she using? A bucket? John felt powder fall into his eyes and he tried to rub it out. It was painful.

“Johnny, do you think I’m pretty?” the mother peered down at her boy, frightening the creeps out of him. She looked like a clown with a red button nose, really white skin, and a fake, sarcastic smile in abnormally thick red lips.

John woke up. With a scream.

He felt sweaty and his clothes stuck like magnets onto his skin. The bed sheets were soaked wet as if they were dumped with a bucket full of warm water. His body felt hot, so hot that he felt like an oven in a freezer. His heart thumped like a stampede in his chest.

“What a frightening dream,” he thought to himself. He never had a dream like this before. He never did feel frightened by clowns before. He didn’t quite remember the imagery. He only remembered the subject matter.

He tried to recover from his dream amnesia. Was that his mother?

No it wasn’t. He didn’t have a mother. He never did. At least, he never did see her before. If he had a mother, she was probably prettier than the woman in the dream because his dad always hit on hot women, as far as he’s seen. His mother was not a clown. His mother could not be a clown. His dad didn’t like clowns.

John peered out his window and paid attention particularly to the trees the penetrated out of the ground.

He reached into his own pants and started to… you know what.

He’s not little anymore. He’s seventeen. And in three months, he’d be an official adult.

He took out a Kleenex and wiped himself up.



Copyright 2008 August Blackwood
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Comments (15)
Posted by Tarhead Mugwump
2008-03-17 12:34:34
um...

that was a little weird for me...

mom's lap

clowns face

all a dream

trees

dad hates clowns

you know what...

adulthood

truly went flying over my head...
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Posted by lorislittlesecret
2008-03-17 12:44:09
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What what?
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Posted by Earnest Granger
2008-03-17 12:54:13
This

is shocking...

I don't get it. I feel sick, confused, and outright amused.

Read it second time...still don't get it.
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Posted by Baethan Dawn
2008-03-17 13:31:22
Lol

That tree thing was totally random. What did it have to with this story. Hmmmmmmm?????
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Posted by Dirkin
2008-03-17 18:09:46
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I don't understand why someone would "you know what" after such a horrifying dream. Perhaps John is a psychopath.
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Posted by Carey Joyce
2008-03-17 21:07:47
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Do the tree's outside symbolize an erection?

Do dreams of his unknown mother make him horny because she is the most important and yet totally unattainable female in his life?
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Posted by cookingWine
2008-03-17 21:44:38
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THAT, WAS FANTASTIC.

I don't think you could have ended that better than it did.

I'll tell you why I love it:

That's fucking deep. Dreams, mothers and not having one. Then, jack off. Perfect.

This is going in my favorites, and I'd hope to see more from you.
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Posted by June Eclipsis
2008-03-18 05:45:10
Actually...

This story was supposed to be longer, but I was too lazy, so I cut it up in the middle. It did make it have an interesting ending though, I must admit.
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Posted by Miss Understood
2008-03-19 16:32:35
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WOW....

My favorite so far. Deep & well written.
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Posted by Munky
2008-03-22 02:10:37
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Spent the last 5 minutes thinking of a comment, can't do it. It was disturbing and I liked it.
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Posted by R.E.Potter
2008-03-22 14:34:41
,,,

Didn't get it..sorry
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Posted by June Eclipsis
2008-03-28 19:42:03
Hmmm...

Interesting questions. I'm sorry, but I don't think I'll be able to answer them. I don't really analyze my own work.

But, I think they could work that way...
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Posted by June Eclipsis
2008-03-28 19:43:09
Sorry...

It might have been a little too much.
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Posted by June Eclipsis
2008-03-28 19:44:18
Hmmm?

I don't know what you are talking about if you don't know what it is that you don't know.
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Posted by June Eclipsis
2008-03-28 19:45:20
I have...

Mixed feelings towards your comment.
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