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I wrote this poem and had RE Potter look it over. ...

Limbo


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Written by Anna DeVine   
Sunday, 16 March 2008
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Limbo




Sated shades of awareness
Marveling at the lucidity
Of measured bewilderment

Thought elucidating obscurity
Shifted the mark of beauty's
Response to hesitation

Yet failed to notice when grace
Seeking the footsteps of dawn
Faltered along the valley

Of wavered time

Eradicated lost remnants of love
And scorned the sifted ashes of hope
Once searching for a tired universe

 

 In Limbo... 




 



Copyright 2008 Anna DeVine
Keyword: Here and There
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Comments (7)
Posted by Tarhead Mugwump
2008-03-17 00:31:49
i wonder...

did you ever want to snap an hourglass in half and set the sand free?
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Posted by Sad Sara
2008-03-17 00:44:06
Yeah

So much so that I did exactly that
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Posted by Roadkill315
2008-03-17 06:59:34
....

I really like the words used here, but I admit I am not sure what it is exactly that you are in limbo for.
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Posted by gsaracen
2008-03-17 07:30:37
limbo....

being there is weird....but life is limbo to some extent. Even heaven is limbo when you get bored of paradise.....eventually.... Only hell...ironically....remains continuously stimulating!

Hmmmm.... never thought bout freeing the sand in an hourglass... because I am cruel and I LIKE to see it go up and down in futility! jk.

sort of
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Posted by June Eclipsis
2008-03-17 13:15:44
I

love the picture! And the poem was beautiful!
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Posted by Dirkin
2008-03-17 18:47:17
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Beautiful
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Posted by Zombie Punk
2008-07-28 15:46:25
Lonely Feather

The picture was so amazing! I never thought about that, a feather is in limbo the whole time it's floating like that, isn't it?

Anyways, this Poem was terrific! Really emotional and well written. Great work here.

Keep well
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