fresh love ............

..............fresh love............................. breeze of fresh air entered into my body with deep breath. it kissed every cell of my body passionately pouring soul. every cell responded with great love and utmost vigour. for a couple of moments,both ceased to exist.breeze dissolved into cell and cell dissolved into breeze shedding haloes of self consciousness.breeze and cell explored souls and shared deepmost feelings without uttering single word.when they parted with there lips felt that there are no lips at all.no breee and no cell also........only the love filling every lacunae of molecule............now i exhaled not breeze of fresh air..... but breeze of fresh love...............

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Posted by R.E.Potter 2008-03-16 06:29:01 ,,, Not really sure what your talking bout...but its probally me. Also, need caps on new sentences. + Report this comment
Posted by Roadkill315 2008-03-16 06:44:43 .... love can be complex, and perhaps molecular... deep breath now + Report this comment
Posted by lorislittlesecret 2008-03-16 10:59:18 .... Are we talking about the way Spring makes you feel like your in love..or the way that love makes you feel like a breath of fresh air? + Report this comment
Posted by Tarhead Mugwump 2008-03-16 20:11:06 i liked the content but the format made the people in my head argue... + Report this comment
Posted by wonderland 2008-03-19 05:30:02 .... hi..intelligent question... thats the love..which has strong potential to turn summer into spring.... + Report this comment

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