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Written by Hanna McCormack   
Thursday, 13 March 2008

I know how it feels
To be hated,
For no one to care,
To be all alone
With no one there.

I know how it feels,
To be on the outside,
To be left out,
To be my own best friend.

But don’t worry,
I’ll be here for you,
Like you were for me
I’ll be the one that sticks up for you,
Even when everyone turns their backs,
I’ll lend you a hand
And help you up when you fall.

I know how it feels
To not have a real friend,
Someone who doesn’t talk about you
Behind your back.

But it’s all okay,
You have me,
And I’ll fight till I bleed
And even give you my life,
If that’s what you need…



Copyright 2008 Hanna McCormack
Keyword: poetry friends
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Posted by Dirkin
2008-03-14 05:03:39
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we all need a friend like that
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Posted by 1800
2008-03-14 11:02:22
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It always feels good knowing that there is someone out there who could relate to us.
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Posted by R.E.Potter
2008-03-14 13:56:11
,,,

God, where were you when I was getting pummeled in elem school..lol...actually, I was the class stud and big man on campus...by the way,,I write fiction so dont by into any of that.
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Posted by Tarhead Mugwump
2008-03-14 16:19:11
I think

that is an interesting message. many times, the 'true' friend is the last friend uncovered. it works the same as the 'wingman' method - except that more often than not - the acts of kindness are not properly recognized - and it hurts...

well done.
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Posted by nick711
2008-03-18 12:20:22
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it almost feelings like this was written for...me.

lol
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Posted by Thakur
2008-03-23 03:36:01
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this is a poetry that comes directly from the heart of a person who would love to have a true friend but lacks 1 but is always ready to b some1's true friend.
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Posted by extinct kiddo
2008-03-25 21:55:19
haha

Yup, Nate.

Say what you want.

Haha.
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Posted by Egoist
2008-05-03 16:37:54
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What an awesome friend you must be. How could you ever be hated with an attitude like that. "And even give you my life,

If that’s what you need…" That's a whole shitload of friendship right there.
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