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Cold

                   Shivering

                                       watching the snow melt

drip

            drip

                           drip

My heart

                  is thawing

                                       like crystals cracking, breaking

crack

               crack

                            crack

My mind

                 clearer

                                      coming back to life

focus

             focus

                           focus

Spring

                  arriving

                                       at last.

Where

                 the hell

                              have you been?

Keyword: Thoughts on Spring

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Posted by lorislittlesecret 2008-03-09 12:20:54 .... Whoo hoo warmer weather. Though I found the arrangement of this poem hard to read. Maybe it's just me... + Report this comment
Posted by Sharon Galligar Chance 2008-03-09 14:56:40 .... Hey - thanks for your comment. The word arrangement was supposed to resemble drips...just trying something new! + Report this comment
Posted by Egoist 2008-05-10 13:18:44 .... I like the arrangement, though I question why it's like that? The last line gave me a smile, and I like the metaphor to the heart thawing. Very enjoyable, where the hell have we been? + Report this comment

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