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Written by Cody Horonzy   
Thursday, 06 March 2008

 

Razorblade

 

Sitting alone with all the blame

I've painted the walls with my shame

 

I'm becoming unaware

Myself, I'm beginning to scare

 

Took out my razorblade today

Cut out a couple of veins and threw them away

 

Drilled a wire through my cheek

Then I cracked a faithless smile and watched it bleed

 

I am erasing myself, getting rid of it all

But don't worry you won't have to join me in this fall

 

Believe me I really do understand

You just love yourself too much to lend a hand

 

That's okay

You never gave a **** anyway

 

Lying here mangled, with all the pain I've caused myself

What I've inflicted still doesn't compare to the hurt you've dealt

 

Nothing's ever true

Unless it's full of black and blues

 

Non-entities and sorrowful memories

Just broken truths and incurable remedies



Copyright 2008 Cody
Keyword: Razorblade
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Comments (4)
Posted by tarhead
2008-03-06 23:42:00
that

just plain scary...
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Posted by Sad Sara
2008-03-08 03:56:00
What the hell is wrong with you?

Hehe, juss kidding

Sort of

That was freakin' psychotic, but I like psychotic

Sort of

Yer last two lines here:

Non-entities and sorrowful memories

Just broken truths and incurable remedies

Were more like kick lines instead of punch lines.

I'll tell yer what, people might say what they want about such dark Poetry, but I guarentee that many more can realte to this one that would be willing to admit.

Not me though

The others

Hehe

Very effective Cody,

Y'gots it...

'Anna
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Posted by Zombie Punk
2008-08-12 20:43:54
Razorblade

"Non-entities and sorrowful memories/just broken truths and incurable remedies" Okay, that's bloody cool sounding.

I agree with 'Anna, this was quite the psychotic descriptional verse, but I like psychotic. And as she also she, this is very easy to relate to.

Excellent work once again!

Cheers,

Max
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Posted by scooby
2008-09-26 10:54:23
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This is very good. You have captured the emotion in this. There are alot of people hurting out there and they just feel like no one cares. Great job, Cody.
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