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Short Stories Poetry Panties: A Romance Ruined
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Panties: A Romance RuinedThis story may contain adult content. |
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| Written by George Saracen | |
| Tuesday, 04 March 2008 | |
| Last Updated ( Tuesday, 04 March 2008 ) |
Secret and pretty panties,
Belonging to a secretive and pretty woman,
Are a pleasure to behold,
Precious like gold,
One can never be too old,
To smartly snap them or obssess,
On every floral filigree no less,
And to feel through them,
And to undo them,
To play, and now we get edgy,
I give my Love a super-atomic wedgie!
Comments (34) |
 03-04-2008 06:54, just a 5 minute micro-poem that came to mind. (ty my Muse! u know who you r) » Reply to this comment...  03-04-2008 08:44, WHAT POEM » Reply to this comment...  03-04-2008 11:01, I never get why women would pay twenty bucks for a piece of string to cover their genitals with. » Reply to this comment... 03-04-2008 11:11, ...it turns us on. We are the suckers, not them. :) But yeah...a string is pretty risky if happen to end up making out with a wedgie freak. Yeah, Potter, it is more of a trivial rhyme... if lots of people dislike the idea of posting this small rhyme I'll delete it. Sorry if you felt your time was wasted... » Reply to this comment...  03-04-2008 11:12, Apparently you've never seen the right woman in a 20.00 pair of string...hahaha. Cute poem about something that isn't very poetic. But you didn't need to wedgie her at the end. A simple pat on the butt would do » Reply to this comment... 03-04-2008 11:26, yes Lori...I know I should be constructive, not destructive. No wonder she left in a huff, I totally killed the mood. Me and my immature. Sometimes the temptation is too great.... I screw up in more ways, on the earth I spend the more days, for what it's worth, mistakes often lead to mirth... » Reply to this comment...  03-04-2008 11:45, Im just here for the picture! » Reply to this comment... 03-04-2008 12:32, lol...What I meant with my comment is that I never saw a poem to begin with,,to busy staring at the lace....when you put a pic like that up....your story/poem is always gonna be secondary....but no, you did not waste my time,,,not in the least..lol...to settlle the score,,,your poem was good...just not as good as the pic....can I get an amen. » Reply to this comment... » See all 1 replie(s) 03-04-2008 12:33, You guys are perverts..... » Reply to this comment... 03-04-2008 12:37, you are correct. thirteen too. yes we are. » Reply to this comment... 03-04-2008 12:43, Any one know how to save pictures, just curious. » Reply to this comment... 03-04-2008 12:46, right click and "save picture as". hope this helps. » Reply to this comment... 03-04-2008 12:51, Man,,I thought I was bad with computers. » Reply to this comment... 03-04-2008 12:58, THIS IS 13. Now come on lads it was a joke.Trying to rustle the womens feathers up a bit. » Reply to this comment... 03-04-2008 13:03, I am possessed..... ommm..... » Reply to this comment... 03-04-2008 13:06, I like this site but it has weird security issues and yeah... sometimes the user accounts "overlap" in some weird way... it was shoing be b.k's identity and email address a while back... hope admins fix it. » Reply to this comment...  03-04-2008 18:09, I juss gotta. I wasn't gonna since a smirk was originally sufficient fer me amusement. But then I realized that a classic 'dudes and depth' moment was happenin' here, and thought: Bloody hell, what a great stroke of luck fer me hilarity to be witnessing a metaphoric near drowning in conceptual swimming. This is better than finding a piece of candy in me pocket I tell yer. The way the lot of yer are goin' on about a pair of lady's knickers like they are the best thing on earth. LOL. But yer all have been real nice to me since I've joined; treat me real respectable like yer do. Therefore, I'm goin' to spare yer many future lady troubles by pointing and laughing at the obvious. Lady's knickers are not the best thing on earth; they're next to the best thing on earth. Yer welcome 'Anna (oh, and Thirteen, I'm just curious..."Any one know how to save pictures, just curious." wtf? lol, sorry, it's yer ambiance yer got goin' on here) Oh and George, you know lol » Reply to this comment...  03-05-2008 21:41, a super atomic wedgie in a gstring? Ouch! Fun poem » Reply to this comment...  03-06-2008 07:13, Why did I know this would end up on the front page? » Reply to this comment... 03-06-2008 07:18, Everyone is gonna be putting up photos of women underwear on their stories.Its a new craze starting. » Reply to this comment... 03-06-2008 08:32, Ok... am sorry bout the panty pic. Next time the pic will not have the panties. haha. jk? heh. ok. point taken. » Reply to this comment... 03-06-2008 15:18, This is shameful, ever heard of right clicks?? No more undies for you lot! » Reply to this comment...  03-06-2008 17:43, I was with you, right up until the super atomic wedgie! » Reply to this comment...  03-06-2008 18:15, That woman looks pretty jacked...in the picture...she has abs...she scares me. I found this poem scary, mainly the pictures fault... » Reply to this comment...  03-07-2008 04:58, My wife is a hottie and looks awesome in a nice pair 50 cent panties. I totally drool like a "DUH" when she's in a $20 pair and the silky laced fabric is just hugging every... OH, yeah, the poem... I liked it. Cute ending. Just about captures the typical essence of the little boy in every guy: he appreciates the hot sexyness that the adult half of his brain recognizes, yet the 5 year old half of his brain can't help but ruin the romantic moment with childish behavior! BRILLIANT! Like looking her deeply in the eyes and moving in for a passionate kiss, then squeezing out a fart just because! I'd like the picture of my wife back, too, when you're done with it! » Reply to this comment... 03-07-2008 06:26, heh... yeah thanks for the pic, and the reviews, everyone! » Reply to this comment...  03-09-2008 20:28, My first thoughts: a) Irreverent b) Humorous c) OhgodMEN! *eye roll* » Reply to this comment...  03-11-2008 05:26, I'm shocked by this sudden pervertness. I just clicked on this story to see what all these people saw as so good in this story. I'm shocked to find most of the reviewers to be men, and to see that these men have returned OVER and OVER again to the same page, which is clearly shown by the number of reviews. Yuck, you guys make me sick. And I thougth I was a perv. The pic is disturbing. Her waist is so thin that it seems as though it was a man that has gone through sex re-assessment surgery. What happened to all the gentlemen of the world???????? » Reply to this comment... » See all 1 replie(s) 03-11-2008 05:29, cardonanthony@yahoo.com » Reply to this comment... 03-11-2008 05:53, one thing...maybe this poem is getting a lot of hits based on google searches for "sex" or "panties". also...it has been up for too long. Maybe it should be removed from front page. » Reply to this comment...  03-17-2008 20:24, this is a strangely bizzare yet hilarious poem. 5 stars » Reply to this comment... 03-26-2008 11:53, bizarre but I like » Reply to this comment...  04-23-2008 09:08, I laughed so hard through the whole thing and I don't think I was suppose to. *blushes* Very funny » Reply to this comment... » See all 1 replie(s)  04-23-2008 10:50, wedgie poem, a first for me. » Reply to this comment... |
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