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Written by rachael   
Thursday, 28 February 2008
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June 2nd 2001

Dont ask me how it happened, it just did. It was a normal everyday day. I woke up, had breakfast, got to work then BAM it happened. Its all a blur. I was stuck standing before a dead body. I had no clue what to do with it. To make thongs worse I had to open shop in 10 minutes. So you could imagine a middle aged man panicing. I figited with my apron as I walked back and forth trying to think of what to do. I picked the body up and slung it over my shoulder. He was one of those punk kids that waved their hands in the air. He held a gun to my face, i could just tell the cops it was self defence. Before a I knew it I was stuffing the lifeless body into a small freezer.

The day went on normal, I surved customers and chopped meat. But in the back of my mind the same question played on my conscience. What am I going to do with the body? Every hour grew slower and slower until I couldn't stand it any longer. I closed the shop early and flung the freezer door open. I had to rid myself of the body. I went over hundreds of options but one stood out. I decided to chop the body up. But what to do with the pieces was another problem.

I lay in bed tonight writing in this diary 100% confident that evering will be fin. Its 10:40 and i guess its time to go to sleep for tomorrow is another busy day.

June 3rd 2001

I was a little scepticle...no-one seemed to notice. The desicion was perfect, sell the meat. All meat looks the same. All I had to do was cut the pieces in shape and the left overs were minced. The day went on normal and before I knew it it was closing time. A sat on the back step and took a long drag from my cig. The murder played little on my conscience. He deserved it, waving the gun in my face and talking in some kind of street talk. All i see it as one less problem in the world.

There was a time when I did doubt when a customer asked about the meat. I paniced i didn't know what to tell her. Then I calmed myself down, she doesnt know make up some bullshit. I just told her that I had an apprentice and he did a couple of mistakes. She walked away not knowing that in her bag there was a rack of humin ribs.

My favourite tv series monk has ended and its time for bed...9:30...need to get some sleep for tomorrow is another busy day.



Copyright 2008 rachael
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Comments (7)
Posted by butchersblend87
2008-02-28 19:21:33
awesome.

That reminds me of Sweeney Todd where he kills the people that come to his barber shop to sell to this meat pie maker woman.

It also reminds me of the show Breaking Bad when they decide to dissolve a meth dealer they killed in acid.

And one more thing... isnt monk on from 9-10 now? it used to be on at ten.
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Posted by thirteen
2008-02-28 22:55:42
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It was good, yes simular to sweeney todd.

But does it matter butchers blend that monk is on at 9-10.Im gonna read the rest now.
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Posted by butchersblend87
2008-02-29 09:38:34
idea is cooler

sweeney todd does it because he is fucking crazy. the butcher is doing it for profit. thats whats makes the concept of this darker. being crazy is a disclaimer. saying "this guy was a real jerk and the dregs of society so i killed his ass and passed it off as beef" is cooler.
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Posted by J. Grimm
2008-03-02 19:23:50
An alternative to MAD COW...

Good story. Makes you wonder about the meat packing industry sometimes. The horror is that, as sick as it is, the pubic wouldn't have to worry about MAD COW!

P.S.- I love Monk, too! Good call.
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Posted by Dirkin
2008-03-02 21:12:30
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I doubt anyone would be able to tell the diff between mince cow and mince human... disturbing
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Posted by deadfamilytree
2008-03-19 01:28:46
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the story was originaly going to be a comedy but as i wrote on it turned out different.

i tried to base the story on sweeney todd and a new tv series called Dexter.

Im glad that you liked it, n im not a big fan on emotions^^;
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Posted by resistanceisfreedom
2008-04-05 21:12:52
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I'm glad it didn't turn out a comedy. I think it's better dark and gruesome. But Dexter, do you watch that series? I absolutely love the show. I think it's brilliant.
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