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Written by George Saracen   
Tuesday, 26 February 2008
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I could not write a poem,
More than I could make a golem,
I do not have the power,
To even describe a flower,
I’ve been rotten at verse,
Since I was born first,
I can’t make a rhyme,
With all the world and time,
My vocabulary is restricted,
My vision constricted,
Eloquence eludes me,
“Incompetent” concludes me,
I try to find inside me,
Words that would please thee,
Instead there are toys,
And things and worlds made for boys,
Nothing that I could show,
A woman so she should know,
That I am not just an empty vessel,
A whistling kettle,
Or a dirty ladle,
A plain thing by any label,
Or a stray dog,
Or a passing fog,
But I am myself,
Who cannot rhyme or much else,
But who is trying his best,
To live up to the test,
Of contradicting myself,
And before I say anything else,
I plead that though illiterate,
I am not inadequate,
To be your friend,
To the end,
My words are not doves,
But I can love,
Like a moth does fire,
Like a bard his lyre,
Like a warrior his blade,
A man a maid,
So sample this simple taste,
Slowly, without haste,
And then decide and see,
If my love pleases thee.



Copyright 2008 George Saracen
Keyword: Me and Poetry
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Comments (4)
Posted by Sad Sara
2008-02-26 08:26:54
Sarky

What yer got goin' on here?

Is this some jaundiced midnight view of self love?

lol

That was the best dark-sarky poetic elucidation I have read in five months.

Aye

'Anna
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Posted by UrzTrly
2008-03-09 21:14:56
OH! That's what I'm talking about...

This love poem felt much more like it had your personality behind it!!!

(Is somebody who uses what people write to dissect their Psyche)

Good work!
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Posted by tarhead
2008-03-09 21:24:35
that

was a nice surprise.
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Posted by 20CARMEN_NiCOLE11
2008-04-26 08:47:37
....

that was great

i really like it

nice job
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