A New Beginning Only For You

The rain feels so good on my face

Just when you think you found your place

Everything gets erased

I have been alone all my life

The dust irritates my eyes

The gravity has gone to zero

There are no more heroes

All that's left is just the same old pretend

I have decided to build you a new beginning through my end

Everything is gone

And I simply could not move on

Wasting myself away isn't all that bad

When you think about it, sorrow's the only thing I've ever had

With that last thought I begin to disassemble

In this final end nothing can be brought back together

My pieces get scattered in a peaceful stream

This has all just been my own selfish dream

The old world implodes and a new one erupts

I hope the new revised you finally gives all the lies up

I decided to throw myself away

Only to give you a second chance here today

Don't worry about me, my once true love

True happiness lies here, in all of my blood

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Posted by Sad Sara 2008-02-26 10:14:33 Poetry The ways from inside which help one cope with hardship-- Not that crook, or leak, or...too much care is plainly no use, for you can have a heart attack by unknown glitches of fate. The poet's treasure trove, the soul he believes he has, therefore he has-- always the wall to whom much you confide in. Thing is, even though the wall doesn't crack from physical impact, the paper's writ may have a physical impact in others' souls, for they're believers of such possession as well. I hope yer mend well. Poetically, yer seem rather healthy. Aye, 'Anna + Report this comment
Posted by gsaracen 2008-03-11 19:18:56 .... well...pain CAN lead to rebirth. And rebirth is key. you may fall to pieces...but eventually you come back together stronger. ist gut. + Report this comment
Posted by gsaracen 2008-03-11 19:20:57 .... try having a tiny bit more rythm. poetry is 50% form and 50% message. (in my view)...delay a crucial line or point till you can fit it in sometimes. Or inset something less meaningful that gives you the right rythm and rhyme. Well SOMETIMES anyway. + Report this comment
Posted by scooby 2008-10-08 14:35:31 .... wow this is really good, Cody... such pain makes you want to cry for the guy... but then such self sacrificing for the one he loves... this is beautiful (if my interpretation of it is right that is) Great job. + Report this comment

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