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WHAT KIND OF GOD? By Jon Stalk...

Three Words
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Written by Daniel Greene   
Saturday, 23 February 2008
You sat I can't be serious?
You say I can't be strong?
Who said I was gone?

Who was with you when...
you were down
you were stuck like a rock,
toiled and loaded down?

Who was there when...
you wanted to be alone
your eyes were wet
and flooding your world?

Who was around when...
your world came crashing down
you needed to be reached for
and held in anothers arms?

Who was with you?
Who was there?
Who was around?
Was I on your mind?

You were never down
Your eyes were always dry
Your world stayed strong
You are free

You said I can't be serious
You said I can't be strong
You came by to see me
And three words stood out.

Copyright 2008 Daniel Greene
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Posted by Sad Sara
2008-02-26 10:33:50
Strength? Yeah, yer gots it...

Conquest of love-- sheer illusion in whose power lies in the metaphorical portraying of a plundered defeat, perhaps after a row of subsequent losses.

It all boils down to how much of a cloak fallen feathers can be as the "official mascot of peace" is downed, or what grand kind of merriment's polar opposite dead flowers can hint at. Love...makes all evident. In between the glory of both 'evident' and 'arcane,' this poem is as short as it's a fabulous picture.

I'm rather fond of yer Poem.

Aye

'Anna
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Posted by danielgreene89
2008-02-27 21:18:33
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I'm glad you enjoyed it. This was one of the first poems I wrote.
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Posted by Sad Sara
2008-03-03 16:02:56
Really?

I find that most exceptional, truly.
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