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Written by kyle   
Friday, 15 February 2008
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the shadow

He saw the shadow and in the blink of an eye it was gone. This was the fourth time he had seen this shadow in the past two hours the sightings were getting more frequent and he still had no idea who or what it is. At that very moment he decided that he would and must for the sake of the little sanity he had left since the incident. There it is again he said to himself as he followed the shadow figure. (Four years earlier)-This time I really did it she is no more he thought to himself as he ran down Main Street. There it is ha I got you this time you bastered you’ve followed me ever since she died now I will catch you, you murderer. (For years ago exactly)-Where am I how did I get here where is Diana o **** Diana im so sorry i never meant for this to happen please forgive me it wasn’t my fault I swear to god Diana come back please. There again going into that building. That’s odd this place is some how familiar to me it’s as if I’ve bean here before no it couldn’t be I would remember this place. Wait  there in that room as he walks through the door all the memories that have haunted him every night for the past four years came back  the knife everything then he sees it in the corner staring at him through the mask. Everything was all to familiar to him, how he felt as though he already knew the thing that was behind the mask but just could not place how he did. Finally after many strained minutes he walked up to the thing that murdered Diana his Diana his one true love, he pulls off the mask to see himself starring back at him.

Copyright 2008 kyle
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Posted by lorislittlesecret
2008-02-15 11:50:06
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What? I am assuming this is a story about someone with a split personality that killed his love right?
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Posted by My Opinion
2008-02-16 09:54:37
scratching

question, what exactly do you have against commas. The lack of use made it impossible to relate to this story. But I'm not sure even with them that it would have made much sense. I know you have good stories in ya,,,I just don"t think this was one of them... p.s..next time submit in plain print.
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Posted by R.E.Potter
2008-02-16 15:24:34
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nice twist at the end.
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