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I love it that you care enough

for me

to see what I have written,

to want to know what I have written,

to need to see what I am thinking.

Show me that I'm more than

just a plug to fill a gaping hole,

the random one who plays the role,

that we connect in mind and soul,

through barriers that divide us all,

like magnets of opposing poles,

that you and I against the fold,

have broken our own unique molds,

male and female, halves and whole,

working for a common goal.

I'm happy that I interest you

enough

for you to view my passion,

that you would look without my asking,

I write this should that ever happen.

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Posted by tarhead 2008-02-10 23:50:54 nice drawer piece. well done! + Report this comment
Posted by thirteen 2008-02-11 01:54:59 .... lovely, but a bit jealous I'm no good at poems. + Report this comment
Posted by Terry Collett 2008-02-11 12:32:25 .... The poem unfolds well and delivers well. + Report this comment
Posted by Pez 2008-02-12 09:40:53 Oi *is restless. This is making butterflies flutter inside my stomach (and you know how much I like that)... What a nice poem... whomever it's dedicated to, or whomever came to mind while writing it, I'm jealous of. I like this one very much Dirk! + Report this comment
Posted by Elizabeth 2008-02-12 12:37:31 .... This is a nice poem, yes.. Though I find it pretty unnatural when the lines are sometimes divided like that; from between a sentence. It is so with both English and Finnish, and I guess in any language. Still it's very nicely said, and it's made like an open letter, but yet it doesen't consider things too personal; it could be for anyone from anyone. But after all it is as important for both sides, who ever they were. + Report this comment
Posted by onyxdragon 2008-02-13 18:14:43 Actually... I meant to click the other guy's story, sorry. Kidding. Nice, didn't know I was going to get thanked. + Report this comment
Posted by R.E.Potter 2008-02-14 08:26:46 ... great job...again. + Report this comment
Posted by Terry Collett 2008-03-07 12:36:16 .... I am revisiting this poem just to see it again and enjoy it all over again. + Report this comment
Posted by Dirkin 2008-03-07 21:14:16 .... =) + Report this comment
Posted by resistanceisfreedom 2008-03-16 08:49:04 wow yes you were right this is a very nice piece. i can feel where your coming from. i love the last line. i think it flows very well and i love some of the imagery in it as well. def one to add to the favorites. please write another. + Report this comment
Posted by Dirkin 2008-03-16 13:43:52 .... =) thank you + Report this comment
Posted by 20CARMEN_NiCOLE11 2008-05-06 14:44:05 :D WOW. THAT iS SWEET. i WiSHED PEOPLE WROTE STUFF LiKE THAT ABOUT ME...LOL. NO BUT THAT iS AWESOME. + Report this comment
Posted by Sad Sara 2008-06-08 18:59:09 Oh my I am so pleased yer found someone who finds yer more than a plug to fill a hole. lol Sorry, not meaning to down play yer verse with me sarky perception, but that juss struck me funny fer some reason. I love it Wonderful verse Again 'Anna + Report this comment
Posted by Darkness.of.Mystery 2008-06-11 08:17:47 .... Very well done! I liked this one a lot. + Report this comment
Posted by Amatayo 2008-06-28 09:21:49 .... I like the way you wrote this poem and how the delivery came out smooth-ish. + Report this comment

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