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Darth Cellulite


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Written by Matt   
Sunday, 10 February 2008

Once upon a time there was a boy who had the power to shape shift. He was the most envied and most picked on child in the kingdom. Once he grew older he learned how to harness his powers and use them for helping until the new king had dicovered him...

He was furiated that the young man was using his powers to help useless peasants. The king ordered the man and his family to prison. The man changed into a rat and snuck ou of the cell one night and went into the kings bedroom and changed into a demon and scared the king, but the king wasn't scared. He knew it was the man and he gave the man a choice... join him and take over the world or be executed with his family. The man had no other choice he joined the king.

Seventeen years had passed scince the man's family had been killed and he joined the ruthless king. The man was know known as, Darth Cellulite. He had grown fat over the years and the king had forced it. Cellulite hated that the king was only human and he had power beyond any other. Cellute snuck into the king's bedroom and killed him. Cellulite felt great that he had killed the king but yet a strange feeling washed over him. His muscles grew and he lost all his weight. His eyes turned red and he was raging with power. His power grew so strong he exploded and destroyed the entire earth.



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Posted by emobuffy12
2008-02-10 16:08:23
not very goog!

It was just a sprung up idea!
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Posted by Somewiredkid
2008-02-10 17:53:49
Could be better

I like the plot but the ending seemed rushed.
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Posted by Dirkin
2008-02-10 18:08:35
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This is a bit too rushed for me, the whole thing sounded intentionally confusing, if thats what you were aiming for
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Posted by 1800
2008-02-10 18:14:22
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I thought the plot was good, but the ending came soon and it seemed kind of...simple.
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Posted by emobuffy12
2008-02-11 14:22:03
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iT WAS SUPPOSED TO BE FAST AND CONFUSING!
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