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Wolf Within


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Written by Cody Horonzy   
Sunday, 10 February 2008

Wolf Within

 

Out here the snow has begun to fall

And lately I feel nothing at all

 

Maybe the treacherous weather has clouded my judgement

But i've got to get away from you and this government

 

My feet are big blocks of ice

Nothing has turned out right

 

The snow just keeps stinging my face

I wish I could just leave this horrible place

That's filled with your race

 

I'm not like you at all

I'm something that's meant to fall

 

But it's time to get away

It's time to become what I really am today

 

As my footprints turn into pawprints out here in the snow

The wolf inside will show me which way to go



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Posted by Captain Morgen
2008-02-10 15:30:11
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cool. Like the rhyming
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Posted by CELL
2008-04-22 21:24:30
WOLVES!^^

Hehe, this had "Wolf's Rain" written all over it for me. ^^;

But, seriously, in a metaphorical sense, a transformation [in this case one of a man(?) into a wolf] usually means surrending to one's true identity (or part of one's true identity as you noted on the 6th stanza). I think this man was trying to escape social conformation and the ruling sructure. The blizzard probably represents how difficult it can be to flee from that, the obstacles he will encounter... the obstacles can be a lot of things, oneself, peers, media, etc...

But it's weird because the poem itself is quite typical, and that contrasts with the message... as does the use of a wolf. I mean wolves usually travel in packs where a hierarchy is established, one that must be respected, so wouldn't that be going back to what he wants to escape? Sure there are 'lone wolves', but even they want to belong, and even search to belong in a pack...

Agh, I'm looking much too into this. Not one of my favorites, but nice.
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Posted by Zombie Punk
2008-08-12 21:19:58
Wolf Within

"As my footprints turn into pawprints out here in the snow/the wolf inside will show me which way to go" -- fuckin brilliant, man! That last stanza really left a creepy vibe, it made the hairs of the back of my neck stand up.

I just loved this verse.

Cheers,

Max
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