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3000 - Part Four and Conclusion
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Written by Marisa Herrera   
Sunday, 10 February 2008
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I felt like I was going to die. But suddenly a light bulb appeared over my head and I aimed the machine towards the sky held the wires together and hit the button. “Ouch,” was all I could say after being shocked. But I didn’t see. Did it work? I looked in the sky but saw no sign of the machine’s laser having shot the ozone restoration ray.  

 

I took off my shoelace and tied the wires together and once again aimed up and hit the button. A green ray of light went up. I was so excited. I had saved the world. The ozone is going to be restored to its normal thickness. I looked up and saw it still going. It was only a matter of seconds before the world was saved for good.

 

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 “Thank you all for this award. I feel though, I don’t deserve this. My father who died exactly a year ago should. He was the inventor of the world-saving machine. All I did was find it and hit a button,” I said to the press when I won the Nobel Prize for Science. It was three months after I had restored the ozone that I was awarded this.

Copyright 2008 Marisa Herrera
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Comments (8)
Posted by Reese
2008-02-10 11:13:10
Ending

This is the ending to my first completed "story" not counting Lucian Gillee. Hope you enjoy all my stories from now to the end.
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Posted by thirteen
2008-02-10 11:14:15
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Just keep writing, these are good.
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Posted by Reese
2008-02-10 11:19:29
Thanks

Thanks Thirteen. And I will be writing. More and more each day.
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Posted by tarhead
2008-02-10 11:56:59
that was fast!

very good ending! keep on writing!
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Posted by tarhead
2008-02-10 11:58:48
Thank You

Thanks Tarhead also. I'm working on another story right now actually. I hope ot post it by 3:00 Pacific Standard Time.
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Posted by tarhead
2008-02-10 12:01:37
Thank You

Thanks Tarhead also. I'm working on another story right now actually. I hope ot post it by 3:00 Pacific Standard Time.
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Posted by Reese
2008-02-10 12:08:31
Double Post and Wrong Name

I'm sorry about that double post, I'm guessing a bug. Also, why'd it go under your name? Odd.
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Posted by Dirkin
2008-02-10 18:01:21
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that happens a lot here, the phantom comment ghost strikes again. A nice littl series reece, easy to read and fun
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