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3000 - Part Two


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Written by Marisa Herrera   
Saturday, 09 February 2008
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I found the key to my father’s invention room and took his one-man plane. I took it to the launch pad on the roof. As I took a deep breath I hit the start button and was off. I flew into the sky and told the computer I was headed to the center island of the Bermuda Triangle.

 

As the plane slide over the sky as a sled does snow I felt fear over come me. I knew that the fate of the world was in my hands and if I didn’t go I would destroy the world. The computer started to beep. I was near the Bermuda Triangle.

 

As I flew over it the plane was surrounded by thick gray fog. The plane beeped again. It was landing time. I felt the plane bump down to the island. It was beautiful. It seemed untouched by human beings. The fog was also gone. I looked on the map it showed a mountain range then a hole at the bottom of it. I looked up and it was right through a meadow. I raced across it and went into the cave. I looked and found the room. It looked like someone had been there.

 

Then I realized the machine wasn’t there…



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Comments (5)
Posted by Reese
2008-02-09 20:11:38
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Hey again. Hope you enjoy this part two. Also suggestions are open.
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Posted by tarhead
2008-02-09 21:29:05
hello reese

it looks like you're off to a good start. you keep writing them and i'll keep reading them!
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Posted by Reese
2008-02-09 21:33:53
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Thank you Tarhead. It'd great to know at least one person is enjoying my little stories.
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Posted by thirteen
2008-02-10 03:11:53
KEEP THEM COMING

Make that two,i think they show promise
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Posted by Dirkin
2008-02-10 17:53:00
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this reminds me of the fun adventurous tones of the old choose your own adventure books
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