It's a Matter of Importance

The two of them stood there, neither one of them...

The Lottery

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Written by Kb   
Friday, 08 February 2008

 Sitting. Waiting. looking. watching. waiting. waiting.

for inspiration.

 Words that fit. and work. and sound

like they should.

why. why. won't they come??? the words.

Where are they? Who took them?

I HEAR humming.

I SEE red.

I FEEL vague.

I SMELL nothing.

... but no words come to mind. My mind.

My mind? Do I have a proper one? Yes? No?

Then where are the words?

Help me. help find them. the words.

I need them.

oh look.

I think they're hiding in the corner.

Why did you hide??? 

Wait. Where are you going?

 

                         K.



Copyright 2008 Kb
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Comments (4)
Posted by Captain Morgen
2008-02-08 19:47:51
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I totally feel like that a good 95% of the time! Good portrayal.
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Posted by thirteen
2008-02-09 03:49:41
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I liked it, sounds like me alright.
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Posted by My Opinion
2008-02-09 06:49:28
5 stars

I liked this poem about a writers ill fated torture. My suggestion is that you take out the 2nd to last line.(Why did you hide)..we realize they can't be found already) For some reason, it takes a mature sounding poem and brings it down a notch..just my opinion.
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Posted by C.R. Vard
2008-02-11 15:50:09
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enjoyed the poem...sums up a writer's block nicely
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