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The darkness is closing in on it.

The hopes and dreams that used to be, are gone.

Everyone has given up on it.

It is never coming back; no one will miss it.

The room begins to spin.

It seems as if it was never there.

The only remains are faded scars.

Time keeps ticking; life goes on.

The world has suffered no loss.

The room spins faster and faster.

It gets darker and darker.

They have destroyed it.

It has slipped into insanity.

Yet it is still not noticed.

Everyone continues living their pointless lives, without a second look.

They are completely content with never knowing the truth.

They make humanity look like a sick joke.

Mindless drones walk the streets.

While those in the know, are buried underneath.

Well to hell with them, to hell with the light.

It is safer here, in the dark.

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Posted by R.E.Potter 2008-02-08 10:21:51 deep It seems u have quite the knack for writing poetry. + Report this comment
Posted by tzagawd 2008-02-08 12:02:46 .... i like it. Big up to the underground. + Report this comment
Posted by sundrops 2008-02-08 12:14:52 what the hell... the last line is interesting, but before that is mostly lies about humanity, in my opinion. It's such a set outlook on life, that most people with that kind of mindset forget to look around them. + Report this comment
Posted by C.R. Vard 2008-02-11 18:45:53 .... so many messages in this poem, the last line is a message in itself...well written + Report this comment
Posted by Roadkill315 2008-04-03 08:42:42 .... Ah another interesting and disturbing poem here... good it certainly is, the line, "The world has suffered no loss."... I can't help pondering that one more and more here, just what loss is it to have had? + Report this comment

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