Brightness

Lifts my soul

From the depths of hell,

But it will never reach Heaven.

Breathe,

And I see no more.

Sigh,

And I speak no more.

Laugh,

And I cry no more.

All is lost for the other.

Death of thought,

Death of heart,

Death of sorrow.

All are similar,

Make a decision.

Which would I rather lose?

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Posted by Egoist 2008-02-07 16:45:24 .... Nice one, this really makes me think of which one I would want...not that I want any, just if I had to choose one... I like the idea of the poem and the tone it sets. The speaker doesn't even seem worried... I'm still having a heard time figuring out which one I would want to lose. + Report this comment
Posted by June Lunare 2008-02-07 17:25:02 Hmmm... i can't seem to decide either. + Report this comment

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