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Im Not Liking Love


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Written by Phoebe   
Monday, 04 February 2008

Well..I don't personally get what he sees in her. What is so good about her? Seriously. It's not like she's got something I don't. Why doesn't he want me? Am I not important enough?

I have to pretend like I'm happy about it and everything. I play along.."Oh yeh, that's great to know," and, "Oh really, I think you should ask her out, she sounds perfect for you."

It kills me to hear him talk about her. Argghhh! I feel so unwanted. At first I thought he was just some person I met. Now, I think it's love..is it love? Boys are so confusing. I thought he liked me too. If he did, why is he with her. The "other girl."

I don't know what it is about this ONE guy. Why can't I like him, or him. Why!? I'm not liking this thing called 'love.' I'm not liking it ONE BIT!

It's just the other day, we were having so much fun, i thought it went soo well. I must of thought wrong...



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Posted by lorislittlesecret
2008-02-05 12:25:49
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Amen....I understand how you feel....
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Posted by tarhead
2008-02-05 13:26:21
oh yeah?

i wrote a song about this...

it's lines like this, "Oh really, I think you should ask her out, she sounds perfect for you."

that cause stories like this!

well written!
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Posted by R.E.Potter
2008-02-05 15:34:03
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His lost...don't get to down if this is a true story...aint worth it....you'll bounce back.
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Posted by Dirkin
2008-02-05 17:03:16
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The amount of things we must keep to ourselves in this life... frustrating.
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Posted by 1800
2008-02-05 17:31:25
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Women with and their inefficient ideas such as relationships...

Hate to break this to you, but it is a man's instinct to look for those who are most capable of bearing young. Women look for relationships.

It always ends in a struggle with someone having to compromise.
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Posted by Captain Morgen
2008-02-05 18:16:24
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Firstly I'd like to say that women do not have "inefficent ideas" such as relationships. Yes we are sometimes (ok, most of the time) overly emotional, but that is what makes us women and that is a perfectly normal thing. and I hate to break this to you but it is not the mans "instinct" to look for the most capable of bearing young. *cough* homosexual men *cough*. Thank you. But yes, I agree with you that it usually ends in a struggle with someone having to compromise.

This piece is definitely a good starting to an emotional meltdown...however I think it would have served better as a journal entry.

There are some wrought emotions there that I think most women (and some men) have felt. That tinge of jealousy, the feelings of being rejected, or not being good enough. Some further detail and explaination of the event that brought on the emotion would be fitting.
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