At night I still went patrolling like usual. I didn't really go to town that much. After the fight with Jason and me having to go skinwalker I was kind of on the down low.

"Well... Don't you look perky!" a voice shouted from behind a crypt.

"Who? Where are you?" I asked.

"Here I am!" It shouted.

I looked behind me and seen Jake.

"Where the hell have you been," I shouted.

"You know... Here and there. I just stopped by to tell you I hope your death is... Well rather slow." He snapped.

"W-what do ya mean?" I asked.

"I'll let him tell ya instead," Jake said.

From behind Jake a figure in a hooded black robe stepped out. When they dropped their hood my jaw dropped. A pitch white face with no flesh and eye socket as black as coal were staring at me. I was standing in front of the Lord of Darkness.

"Jake, how did you summon him," I stuttered. "Jake... No! Why?"

"Thats right Matt! I ain't got a soul no more," Jake sneered.

The Lord lunged at me and I jumped to the side. He swung back around at me and sent me flying. I landed on my back and hurt my leg. I got up bearing the pain. I punched at the thing but it just sgung to the side and doged. I picked up the axe and swung it between it's legs. It fell to the ground and was dead. I wiped the sweat off my forehead and turned to Jake. He leapt off the crypt and laughed.

"Well that was exillerating but, not good enough. I guess I'll have to kill you myself,"He chuckled.

"No... You want a fight you go else where and do it. I swear to God, Jake, I see you step foot in this town again I will stake you so fast you won't know what happened," I warned. "Take yorself and get the hell out!"

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Posted by Munky 2008-02-05 08:51:37 .... You've got some good ideas there but this story needs more development. + Report this comment
Posted by lorislittlesecret 2008-02-05 08:57:29 .... You know..I hate it when I can't post comments like I should be able to! Interesting idea, but the story needs some work.... + Report this comment
Posted by critic at large 2008-02-05 08:59:00 this was a great story if you are 13 or younger, if your older then this you should take classes on writing, and there is a really neato thing called spellcheck. The story really made no sense...sorry. Don't let this comment discourage you. Keep working and take my advice. + Report this comment
Posted by tarhead 2008-02-05 11:27:56 almost there keep at it! + Report this comment
Posted by Dirkin 2008-02-06 02:54:34 .... Interesting start, I like the hints that this story started somewhere else and we are just getting a peek of whats happening. + Report this comment

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