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Written by Salliy Millys   
Sunday, 03 February 2008
" I get it Claire" I said

"You get What Payton?"

" You just don't want me here" I say.

" Payton you are so wrong" Claire says.

" No no I get it. You have a really important job and I just get in the way. I mean the smoothies and the game I'm just a mess that you won't clean up!" I said.

" PAYTON YOU STOP TALKING THAT WAY RIGHT NOW!" Claire is mad. I can tell.


***REWIND***

It's March. It's March 1st. It's sunny outside. It's 2008. I'm Payton. Payton Lexington. I'm nine. I have an aunt. Claire. Claire Lexington. She hates me. She pretends to love me. My mom is lost. Lost in China. My dad is looking for her. So I was plopped at Aunt Claire's doorstep. You can think of this in a positive way or a negitive way. I think the negitive.

I'm here for one month. I'm really hungry. Aunt Claire isn't home. Smoothies aren't that bad. Not that hard to make.  I mix in all I need. Bananas, Strawberries, Grapes, and Yogart. That's how I like my smoothies. I blend it up. Not blended enough. More. Oops! I forgot to tighten the lid when I put the lid back on the blender. Smoothie went flying. It was like Super Smoothie flying to the rescue. I packed my bags and ran away.

I ran to Aunt Claire's neighbor's house. Her name was Gigi. Gigi had one daughter named Fran. Gigi and Fran. Odd named. Welcoming people. They let me stay there for dinner but sent me home to a mad Aunt Claire.

"Payton, I'm not going to yell. I'm not going to cry. I'm going to talk. This kitchen cost more than $50,000 to modle. Now it'll have to be redone! Any sugustions for the future Payton?" Anut Claire asked.

"Um.. get kitchen Ensurence?" I guessed.

"Wrong! What will happen in the future is NO SMOOTHIES!" Anut Claire yelled.

"Liar!" I crossed my arms.

"Urg!! Payton!! Just listen! I like everything to be perfect! It can't be perfect when it's a mess!!" She said to me.

"OK" I said and that was the end of my smoothie making days.

To Be continued....


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Posted by tarhead
2008-02-05 01:15:17
salliy,

one of the reasons i appreciate your stories, is that they keep me on my toes. i have to adjust the way i think to the way that you are thinking.

your stories are fresh.

BUT! i'm gonna hound you about the spelling thing. i know it's not your pleasure - but you gotta do it!!

either you start using spell check, of i'm gonna hold my breath until i turn brown!

write on!
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