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Written by Robbie   
Saturday, 02 February 2008
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                                    GurlyGurly22:

                          hello? enybody in this chat room? 

 

                                      Killjoy:

                   yup. im heer.i think ive scared every1 away. lol.

 

                                    GurlyGurly22:

                                    whatcha meen?

 

                                      Killjoy:

                             ges peeple think im weerd.

 

                                    GurlyGurly22:

                                    can i ask y?

 

                                      Killjoy:

                                  r u trusy worty?

 

                                    GurlyGurly22:

                                        shur.

 

                                      Killjoy:

wel, im kinda a ax murderer. peeple think i doo it cuz im sik in da hed. but im not. i doo it fer attenchon. my mom sed i wuz a attechon grabbr, until i tuk care of her. but she didnt suffer.

 

                                    GurlyGurly22:

                                dats a sik jk, weerdo.

 

                                      Killjoy:

                         i cant be weerdo...cuz im not reel.

 

                                    GurlyGurly22:

                  wut doo u meen? r u a siko? ur in rehab, rite?

 

                                      Killjoy:

im a cumputr virus, a predator, if u wil. i feed off the lyfe of peeple by chattin wit dem long enuff to get in tha bigest computr uf all: ur brane. now, just sit still, dis ill only hurt a secund.

 

**************Leaving online chat room, entering GurlyGurly22's brain.

 

                                    GurlyGurly22:

                                 git out uf my hed!

 

                                      Killjoy:

sorry, becca. that iz ur name, rite? enyway, dont worry. ull be ded soon enuff. i just hav to make it in to tha core uf ur brane. and...yes! im in!  



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Comments (11)
Posted by Chase07
2008-02-06 20:47:22
hmm...

I'm not sure exactly what to say really haha...wasn't Killjoy that killer clown? What's up with kids these days and not knowing how to spell their words correctly! She deserves to have a virus in her "hed."
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Posted by thirteen
2008-02-07 03:58:22
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Just found it hard to understand the text speak, but good idea.
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Posted by Munky
2008-02-07 05:20:24
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Well uhh. It's so weird that it's charming.
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Posted by wbboomer
2008-02-07 06:16:40
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Well, to answer your questions, Chase07 and thirteen, I used bad spelling (which is kind of ironic since a couple of days ago I won my spelling bee) because when kids like me are talking to their friends online it doesn't matter really if they mispell (did I spell that right?) a word if their online or speed texting. And no, the character Killjoy is just a fake username. It doesn't have anything to do with the killer clown. It's just a name. So does that sum it up?
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Posted by thirteen
2008-02-07 06:30:28
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Firstly, i didn't ask a question. I just said i didn't understand the text lingo. No big deal!

I also said it was a good story.
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Posted by Chase07
2008-02-07 08:12:57
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yeah i know and i wasn't meaning anything bad about it. I talk on aim as well and i understood the whole story without any problem. I just read the killjoy part and it reminded me of that killer clown off that movie. So i just pictured him typing this. So yeah...you summed it up.
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Posted by My Opinion
2008-02-07 10:57:50
My gosh

I'm speechless.
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Posted by wbboomer
2008-02-08 19:16:40
Speechless eh?

Does that mean good?
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Posted by Egoist
2008-02-08 20:23:11
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This is incredibly interesting, just how it all worked out. I mean, I wasn't expecting the story to be in this format, but it makes it seem almost as though this was a realistic event. I believe this was a good idea for a story, as well as the misspelled (
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Posted by Egoist
2008-02-08 20:25:01
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That's strange....it cut off my comment....well to finish:

as well as the misspelled words.

Another thing that I found interesting was that even though the virus was some high-tech being, it still misspelled its own words. That'd be a good disguise for a virus.
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Posted by wbboomer
2008-02-08 20:54:56
Gee

Egoist. I wasn't even thinking about the misspelled words hiding Killjoy's true identity. I just thought that when you're texting a friend or something, they don't care if you misspell a word. Maybe I did disguise the virus. Well, thanks for the comment!
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