If The Sun Didn't Rise

IF THE SUN DIDN'T RISE BY JON STALK...

The Peacock Case

When the train doors opened, a blast of sticky air...

Doll Life
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Written by Salliy Millys   
Saturday, 02 February 2008
" This makes me mad!" I think. Oh yea sorry for my rude manners! My name is Kyra. Kyra Planks! I am a doll who sleeps in a doll crib at night. I have an owner. Her name is Salina. Salina has other dolls like Holly, Sasha, Danielle, and me Kyra. I have blonde curls that never go straight and I have lots of clothes. They came with me. What maked me mad is it is winter and Kyra dressed me in a bathing suit! I am trying my best to put of a jacket but Danielle hides it! It's hard for me to survive as a doll!

"Ha ha ha!" I sing as I steal Kyra's jacket again! I Danielle Planks am a doll. Yes, I am Salina's doll too. Right now Salina dressed me in a sweter and Kyra in a bathing suit! She wants a jacket but I keep stealing it. I have brown curls that change to pink when cold water touched them! Holly is pouting because Sasha is a better dancer that her! I don't even care! Life as a doll is easy as pie!

"Would it kill you to shut up and quit dancing Sasha?" I ask her as she twirls by me. Sasha is a better dancer then me. I am Holly Planks and have blonde hair like Kyra. Mine doesn't change like Danielle's though. I have a key in my back and when Salina winds me up I dance! I can't dance unless Salina turns the key. Sasha can dance whenever she wants! Lucky. Life as a doll is unfair!


"Why should I?" I ask Holly who is sitting on the shelf pouting. I'm Sasha Planks! I can dance whenever I want! Life as a Doll is Awesome!

Copyright 2008 Salliy
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Comments (4)
Posted by Dirkin
2008-02-03 04:37:55
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Strange, kind of reminds me of toy story.
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Posted by tarhead
2008-02-03 16:22:20
very interesting

might make an interesting little series is you enlarge the characters a little bit!
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Posted by C.R. Vard
2008-02-04 14:14:04
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i liked the dialogue...this must be what my Barbie dolls do...
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Posted by Pez
2008-02-20 14:56:44
???

I'm probably reading into this more than I should, but I actually found this story to be very intriguing.

They're all dolls, but each has developed a distinct attitude towards 'a doll's life'... obviously influenced by their possibilities and restrictions (if existent), their appearance and interaction with one another...

I though it was a interesting depiction of human society.

I really liked this one. A lot actually. Good job.
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