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Written by samantha   
Friday, 01 February 2008

Moon Girls  

 

It has been said that every hundred years, on a dark Friday night if you look real close at the moon it smiles. I wanted to see the moon smile. My name is Faith. My great grandma Mc Carty saw this sight, when she was my age. Now, no matter what I am going to see the moon smile.

I told my friend’s about the smiling moon, they looked at me with a smirk as if I was crazy as a loon. That meant I was on my own. Every Friday night from then on, I stared out my bedroom window looking for the smiling moon. Before I knew it, the year was gone. I never have to see the moon smile.

At school, people teased me. Sometimes they locked me in an ugly classroom with twenty green snakes. In my classroom, I could hear them laugh at me even the teachers laughed. At lunch, they put old dried brown grass in my food and other things I would rather not mention. When I am walking in between classes, they push me into teachers hard so I get in trouble. The final insult was when the kids at school nicked named me MOON GIRL.I felt like rolling up into a ball and never coming out

Two weeks ago on a cold crisp dark Friday night, I was staring out my cold window as usual. I turned away for just a second and when I looked back, the moon was smiling. I grabbed my camera and took pictures. I took the pictures to school to show to every kid and every teacher who had laughed at me. I showed them I am not a crazy moon girl after all. Now I am the most popular moon girl at school.



Copyright 2008 samantha
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Posted by Adrianroxhrd
2008-02-02 18:52:02
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lol karma
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Posted by Dirkin
2008-02-03 05:16:13
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Hmm I found this a little confusing... the part where she told her friends, is that implying that she no longer had friends after that? And what does a room with twenty green snakes mean? Kinds of a fun story, but not enough detail
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Posted by 1800
2008-02-03 08:26:23
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If you look up in the sky and see the Moon smile, that means you still have imagination. I consider you to be very lucky.

When I got my telescope in the summer of 2006, I watched the Moon every night. Then I read Arthur C. Clark's 2001: A Space Odyssey.

The Moon is a beautiful thing. Sometimes at night, as I lay in bed, trying to fall asleep, I see a little line of moonlight, and I see the Moon in the night sky. It's like a friend, really.
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Posted by tarhead
2008-02-03 11:57:39
thatwas nice

It kinda bounced around a little, but I think I might spend a little more time looking at the moon on fridays...
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