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Chapter 4 Of A Long Love
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Written by Salliy   
Friday, 01 February 2008
Natelie woke up in the hospital. Grant was by her bedside.

"What happened Grant?" Natelie asked. He kisses her hand then her hair.

" You were shot last week. You wern't suppost to make it. And you almost didn't" Grant said sitting down by her. She sat up so she could lay on him.

" Your baby didn't make it..." Grant began.
Natelie began weeping at the words.

"No No! Your baby didn't make it out with out C Sugery!" Grant said.

Natelie cryed happy tears.

Grant and Natelie kissed and made up.

They named the baby Scotty and three years later he died of a diabeties. At least their love was a long love.

Copyright 2008 Salliy
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Posted by Pez
2008-02-21 07:57:08
....

I'm awfully confused....

... and I certainly didn't expect that ending.

This shouldn't have been posted as a 'series'... but you probably did that to buy some time to finish.

I was impelled to read part after part, but I have to say this isn't a favorite of mine...

And BTW, you posted this part twice; you should get that fixed.
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