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If The Sun Didn't Rise

IF THE SUN DIDN'T RISE BY JON STALK...

Seperate Ways


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Written by Matt   
Friday, 01 February 2008

The sky was grey and the trees were bare. A cold wind blew across my face. Snow covered the ground. Jake and I were going to the cemetary for the funaral of

his great Uncle Jason. He died last week in the hospital and Jake was upset. The ceromony was short because of the weather. After the ceromony we went to the diner

and got something to eat.

"Are you okay," I asked.

"Yea," He said."Just a little shooken up, but I'll be fine. It just happened so fast and I didn't see it coming. Now I feel so bad and like I should have seen it coming."

"Look when my grandpa died I felt like I never spent time with him. I was a walking nut case. I kept thinking that he died because he was tired of the stress in his life. But I know now that it wasn't my fault or anybody else's," I explained.

We went back to the cave played Monopoly. later that night I went on patrol while Jake stayed home. The cemetary was typically dark and dull. I walked past Jake's uncles grave and seen that it was empty.

"What the....," I whispered.

I was slammed to the ground by something strong. I turned around to see Jake's uncle's dead mangled corpse standing over me with a hudge machette. I got up and kicked the thing in the chest. It was wearing a hockey mask, and its brains were sticking out. It leapt up and came at me again. It swung the knife at me. I jumped up and kicked it in the head. I punched it in the chest and it grabbed my neck and tossed me against a crypt.

"What is your deal," I yelled

It pile-drived me into the hole and was on top of me. I shoved it off and jumped up. It grabbed my leg and pulled me down. A sharp sheering pain sliced into my stomach. I looked down to see a big cut on my stomach. I kicked the thing in the face and punched it about three times in the head. It fell on the ground and I jumped up and climbed out of the hole. I rushed back to the cave with blood gushing from my stomach.

"Whoa... What happened to you," Jake asked.

"Well if I told you it was your uncle. Would you belive me," I asked.

"What do you mean my uncle? Matt, my uncle is dead,"Jake said.

"Oh yea it was your uncle. He's back and he almost killed me. He's ultra strong," I said.

"I don't get it. How is my uncle back," Jake asked.

I patched my stomach up and took Jake back out to the cemetary. I showed him the hole. He just stood there in disbelief. We did a quick search and there was nothing. We went back and went to sleep. The next morning we went to town and there was an article in the news paper about an young woman being brutally stabbed. We decided to ask around town and find out what people knew about the girl. All we found out was she was a student at the local college and was studing to become a Neurologist. Later that night we went back to the cemetary to do another search , but yet again we got nothing.

The next morning we went back to town and ate breakfeast. There was no other news. As we were leaving the diner a person in a hokey mask and with a big machette was walking down the street.

"There he is," I said to Jake.

"Oh my God," Jake whispered.

Jake and I ran at him. He smashed Jake in the face and he crumbled to the ground. I grabbed his arm and swung him at a fire-hydrent. He got back up and grabbed my face. he squezeed with such great intensity I thought my eye balls would pop out of my head. I kicked him in the neck and he dropped me. I grabbed Jake and helped him up. Jake Kicked him in the face and I grabbed the knife. his grip was tight and I couldn't grab it. Jake grabbed his head and tried to snap his neck and it didn't work. I changed into my skinwalker and fought him. Jake backed off and let me have him. Even as strong a werewolf I was I still couldn't kill him. He was almost invicible. I changed back to my human form. I kicked him in the jaw and he just stood there. He turned from me and Jake and walked away.

"This is going to be a problem. We got to destroy that thing," Jake said.

"I know and we need to do it fast," I replied.

That night Jake and I went to an Armory store. We got a rocket launcher and two rockets. We went back to the Cemetary and did a full sweep. We seen Jason going into a crypt.

"Hey! LUMPY! Get over here," I called

Jake was ready with the rocket launcher. Jason came walking to us and Jake shot at him. The rocket hit him and caused a hudge explosion. Fire and flaming body parts were everywhere.

"Are you okay," I asked. "Jake? Jake.............Jake where'd ya go?"

I went back to the cave cave and just let Jake chill wherever he was...

 

"Why do you come here," A voice asked.

"I want him dead again," Jake said.

"As you wish," The voice said

"I want power! Lots of it I want to crush him! I'll make him hurt," Jake chuckeled.



Copyright 2008 Matt
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Comments (4)
Posted by emobuffy12
2008-02-03 16:22:52
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theres a lot more...
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Posted by darkestlord
2008-02-03 16:31:00
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It was good, but forgive me im not the brightest bulb in the house.I did'nt get the end, who's the voice.Thanks pm me if you can don't want to look a total idiot.
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Posted by emobuffy12
2008-02-04 13:13:01
you wanted to know...

the vioce was supposelbly a demon but i didn;t get really in depth. I'm making a series, and this is the season 1 finale. I don't know if you read "The End" its the very first story in the series.
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Posted by emobuffy12
2008-02-04 17:42:50
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I sent in the second part of this story.
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