Posted by Chad 2008-02-01 06:58:07 guys,,stand up and fight.
Is this a dig on us guys...if it is then I understood every line this poem was saying except junk is treasure wrongs can pleasure. For this site I give it a 5...but can we be really sure what you were trying to say...can u + Report this comment |  |
Posted by June Lunare 2008-02-01 07:59:56 ....
Open up your eyes
Close your mouth
You use complaints
To gather attention
Among this world
Of loneliness.
Perfection does
Not exist.
To wish for it
Is the one-way ticket
To the horrors
That you attempted to run away from.
If your wish is for
A perfect man,
Sure, you can tie his arms to himself.
But, for fair game,
Let him sew your mouth shut
Before you do so.
Then, you'd be in equal grounds
Together
Forever.
Thank you. + Report this comment |  |
Posted by 1800 2008-02-01 12:25:26 ....
Good poem. I already knew it was going to have to do with, "My eyes are up here." + Report this comment |  |
Posted by onyxdragon 2008-02-07 11:56:02 Did I know what I was trying to say?
Yes, I knew exactly what it was saying. + Report this comment |  |