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Never Close Your Eyes!


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Written by alyreche   
Monday, 28 January 2008

Never Close Your Eyes!
It will be to your surprise
The man you love is leading secret lives
He tells lies, He always denies
After months of cries,
He is finally in my arms
No longer alone
Not even 24 hours and ready to bone
My absence was filled
My love was cheated on,
My heart was broke
He was Cocky and Cold,
The blame was on me
Dissappointed and Angry!
Apologies, Begging Please!
Everything has changed, Nothing is the same
I closed my eyes,
His past was still there, It was everywhere.



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Posted by 1800
2008-01-30 12:59:05
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Women can be such hypocrites.

And men can never win in verbal battles against them.

Man catches wife cheating, it's because "He can't satisfy her!"

Woman catches man cheating, she gets to kill both her spouse and his lover, no questions asked.
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Posted by lorislittlesecret
2008-01-30 13:14:06
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That is hardly true....

Woman catches man cheating, it's because she doesn't do anything for him anymore. Man catches woman cheating, she is cheating on her whole family and turning her back on her loved ones...

But you are right about never being able to win verbal battles...that's because of our superior grasp of the English Language :)
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Posted by Roadkill315
2008-04-03 08:47:37
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Nice poem, stern and direct and an invite to debate it seems :-)
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