So much lost

     has just been found

     dreams that went underground

     pulled back out

     to review once more

     most you had never seen before

     no one can take them down

     nailed to your skull

     too tight to remove

     just try your best

     dont be put down

     by what you tell yourself

     it just takes some time

     be yourself

     dont write yourself off yet

     it will be just fine

     dont get upset

     atleast not yet

Keyword: Holding on

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Posted by Egoist 2008-05-10 12:13:40 .... Just be yourself. That was sort of highlighted in the whole poem to me. It was very well written. Though I didn't understand how dreams could be bad? + Report this comment
Posted by Behind_the_Mask 2008-06-13 11:35:36 ... Makes you think, well at least makes me think. + Report this comment
Posted by Darkness.of.Mystery 2008-06-13 14:40:49 .... This is a poem with a lot of meaning, for me at least, because of some events in my life recently. I know not what you were thinking when you wrote this poem, but I know what it means to me. It was short, but sweet and all too true. Good job. + Report this comment
Posted by the Processor 2008-06-13 14:46:02 ... thank you Gwyn(Darness of Mystery) I hope it encourages you + Report this comment
Posted by Dirkin 2008-06-13 21:10:46 .... People do tend to give up prematurely. Everyone should have a never give up never surrender attitude, so much more can be accomplished. I liked the rhythm of this one + Report this comment
Posted by Zombie Punk 2008-06-14 20:22:13 Yet another good poem although it reminded me of your other poem "Advice" + Report this comment
Posted by Pilgrim 2008-09-04 13:51:06 .... This was alright. One part has got me a bit confused. You say that so much has been lost which infers that they were once posessed, so when you pull out dreams how can you say that you had never seen them before? One spelling mistake near the last line, "Off". + Report this comment
Posted by the Processor 2008-09-04 13:55:24 ... thanks again ..corrected the "off" + Report this comment

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